Pixel Joint Forum: [WIP] baby.doll

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   hi, my first WIP :

- don't know what to do now, but want to improve, especially because there is 16 colors out there barely visible.

thanks in advance for c&c & suggestions.

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nimrod7 Seaman Joined: 28 February 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Topic: [WIP] baby.doll Posted: 12 March 2010 at 5:59pm
	hi, my first WIP : - don't know what to do now, but want to improve, especially because there is 16 colors out there barely visible. thanks in advance for c&c & suggestions.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 13 March 2010 at 8:53pm
	Very nice. My only crit is the colors. That shade of yellow(too green) is not quite right for that shade of pink. I would also try to include a dash of purple in the pinks, like the black selout pixels.
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Manupix Commander Joined: 07 May 2026 Online Status: Offline Posts: 771	Posted: 14 March 2010 at 3:40am
	Very promising wip! "there is 16 colors out there barely visible": probably a good hint there are too many. Try 8! I think some major color option remains undecided. For instance: is it mostly neutral greys with 2 other colors, or mostly colors with some transition greys? (in the latter case, greys might be reconsidered)
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