old and new artifacts

xxmantisxx, Thanks for your councils. While I do mockup, for game is necessary the concept, and at me while only sketches and story :)

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tundra in work, what do you say?



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Edited by Unhero - 24 May 2011 at 1:45am

Why all of my work go to the status of "revision require"? Sorry for offtop 

After seeing you create thread after thread after thread I acutally think your art has improved vastly. Your starting to get proportions right and your shading and textures are looking better too.

Just a couple of things i'd strongly advise working on one piece at a time, you have some nice stuff in this thread keep working on these things and where critisism is given dont give up and try ammending it. There is nothing more satisfying than improving your work until you have an end result that you're happy with.

Also if you insist on continuously starting new art pieces keep them in one thread, your more likely to get replies as it angers people when they see the same member have 5 or more active threads. Maybe get a moderator to ammend this threads name to "Unhero's Art Dump" then you can keep everything neatly in one thread and show each artworks progression.

On the whole you are improving well, maybe work on your english though

Incase you've never heard of an art dump heres an example:



Edited by Saint Minor - 25 May 2011 at 10:05am

Please give advice what form of a roof better to make, this building - a boutique, well or clothing store 

xxmantisxx, thanks 

marble texture:

Alex Pang, will be correct, the line should be more rounded?

Here are my own texture, marble seemed to me not appropriate. Do you think maybe it's worth tweak the color palette?

I think it looks too "perfect", and a little bit generic.  It would be a good idea for you to incorporate this advice.  it appears that you already tried to do something like that in the bricks where I see some variation, but I would push it more than that if I were you.

If you don't want more variation in your bricks, you could incorporate more architectural elements.  Think about what a real cafe exterior looks like.  SHOW us that this is a cafe, don't TELL us it is by putting a sign on it.  As it stands, the type of architecture you are using is bland and reminds me of sh*tty North-American architecture you see in strip malls and rest stops.

Now, if that is intentional, and you are going for strip mall-looking architecture, that is great because you did an amazing job.  Otherwise, I would put more work into the building.


Edited by showtime - 02 June 2011 at 1:39pm

Please criticize work, drew quickly and inattentively:

showtime, h'm clearly, simply it would be desirable to learn, whether there is I a right way?