Pixel Joint Forum: WIP Teddy

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   It's my first post here, so hello everyone!

I'm a newbe to pixelart, so I'd like to ask you for advise.

Namely: what could I improve in my first non-tutorial pixelart:

I wanna polish it but i'm do not know how.

Thanks in advance.

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R.N. Seaman Joined: 06 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1	Topic: WIP Teddy Posted: 06 July 2011 at 2:25am
	It's my first post here, so hello everyone! I'm a newbe to pixelart, so I'd like to ask you for advise. Namely: what could I improve in my first non-tutorial pixelart: I wanna polish it but i'm do not know how. Thanks in advance.
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Scratch_and_Grounder Seaman Joined: 04 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 06 July 2011 at 3:29am
	Well, you need to fix several things first is the jab. Its too sharp and soesn't look right on a bean. make it rounder you need more contrast in the shading, and make your light source clear the part of the bandana on his forehead isn't right either, it should be curving around the head. otherwise it isn't too bad, after you just need to fix those 3 things and we'll see how it looks
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