is a soldier who is alone in the desert !

Help me finish ? D:

I thought it was supposed to be like an oil fire making a smokey background, like this-

Looks much better. The moon is quite nice. If that's a bullet, perhaps rid of it or add flash from the gun? Also you can mix both the color of the sand and the dark background together to create a good color for what can be used as background sand hills to give the piece more debth. Keep it up!

I think you should texture the ground more :)

Do not you think that the bursting of the bullet should illuminate the ground too? From what I see only lights the soldier.

the composition is really boring now...
the way u cropped it makes it look very cramped

also it looks flat..
create more depth, i.e. by adding more dunes further away in the backgound (like delicious suggested...)
heres a quick edit ... i thought could be cool to add a little animation too...





Edited by onek - 07 July 2011 at 4:31pm

look, I done now with color and excitement!

I changed one little thing is when he shoots, he goes back and not forward.

More what I still do not understand is that if he is alone because he is shooting? Is he crazy?

Do not look for more colors, you can use the reflection color of clothes on the floor, try to find a tone color that will match, try to do what their colors will be kept to a minimum.

ready decreases the moon and put the reflection on the floor; D

How many frames are you using?  Maybe you could add some more animation like some fast moving clouds or bullets flying through the air.

I used 17 frames to shoot fast and then stop a little, but I'll do more animation!

I finished ready, this latest issue I changed the sand, shadows and more bullets falling I just have to say thanks to those who helped me: 3





FINISH