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xxmantisxx
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Quote xxmantisxx Replybullet Topic: Sandwich Monster
    Posted: 15 September 2011 at 8:36pm
Not sure where to go from here... I may have to submit this early and then work on it, for the weekly challenge.
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Quote PureAwesomeness Replybullet Posted: 16 September 2011 at 6:31pm
You definitely need more saturation and relation between your colours.
Not sure if this helps, but this is what happens when all you do is change the palette slightly and add a couple more colours to smooth it out:


You should totally add a background and some sandwich ingredients like little grape tomatoes or some meat lying beside him. Maybe you opened the fridge and caught them completely off guard or something.
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Quote Lathien Replybullet Posted: 17 September 2011 at 3:27am
LOL I love that expression. And I agree with Awesomeness, you should put some background and a scene around him. I'm thinking you show a female sandwich like a croissant or something bent over in front of him and she's looking up at us shocked too xD
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Quote Qemist Replybullet Posted: 17 September 2011 at 6:20am
love what pure did to the colours. Imo the sause on the outside together with the outlines need some work apart from that its really cool :D
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Quote xxmantisxx Replybullet Posted: 17 September 2011 at 9:56am
Thanks guys! Especially Pure, thanks for the edit! how's this?



I'll get to work on an edit for a background.
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Quote xxmantisxx Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2011 at 11:59am
Ah man I missed the deadline... Crap...
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2011 at 8:33pm
might as well finish the piece and upload to your gallery anyway. now you don't have to worry about rushing it.
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Quote xxmantisxx Replybullet Posted: 21 September 2011 at 1:19pm
Good point, I'll have a background up soon.
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