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Seaman 
Joined: 20 December 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7 |
   Topic: The Tiny Museum (WIP)Posted: 21 December 2005 at 7:51am |
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I am working on a tiny museum to submit for The Joint so far this is what I have:
I need opinions on how to improve it. |
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Seaman
Joined: 20 December 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7 |
Posted: 21 December 2005 at 2:53pm |
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Someone.... Anyone.... I would atleast like to know someone is there. |
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PixelSnader
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Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194 |
Posted: 21 December 2005 at 5:11pm |
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*wave* hello i'm there *wave*
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Shark
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a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
Posted: 21 December 2005 at 5:21pm |
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i think he/she was looking for:
its ok needs more details, the people seem to be repetitive, perhaps a mummy would be cool and dinosaur stuff aswell :D |
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Seaman
Joined: 20 December 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7 |
Posted: 22 December 2005 at 6:01am |
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Ok, I tried to make a dinosaur but it realy didn't look good at all, I think I will try to make the mmmy though. BTW: I'm a guy. Edited by Error |
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Pixel_Outlaw
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Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829 |
Posted: 22 December 2005 at 8:23am |
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Also many of the colors seem to be a little too saturated.
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Seaman
Joined: 20 December 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7 |
Posted: 22 December 2005 at 10:43am |
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I changed some of the colors and added a mummy
is it any better I still need som ideas for the walls. |
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Shark
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a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
Posted: 22 December 2005 at 1:55pm |
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much more brighter :D
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Seaman
Joined: 20 December 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7 |
Posted: 22 December 2005 at 4:15pm |
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ok... I'm thinking I should make the walls look like 'Adobe and Wood' or 'Concrete with Pillers'. What do you sugest I do? |
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Shark
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a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
Posted: 22 December 2005 at 4:21pm |
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Classy wood would be nice. Also hang a sword on the wall to add
another detail. |
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Seaman
Joined: 20 December 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7 |
Posted: 22 December 2005 at 4:41pm |
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ok I'll get right on it.
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Seaman
Joined: 20 December 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7 |
Posted: 22 December 2005 at 5:42pm |
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ok how is the wood?
not quite sure how to make a good sword to hang on the wall.
I just relised I forgot to texture the door. Edit: fixed the door
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Aleiav
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Posted: 22 December 2005 at 9:23pm |
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I like the wood much better. Less harshness on the eyes.
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Shark
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a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
Posted: 23 December 2005 at 2:59am |
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that wood doesnt really look like pixel art, seeing as there over 150
shades of brown. try looking at others techniques rather than brushes or filters or something. this is a great example of wood |
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Benito
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Joined: 16 November 2005 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 70 |
Posted: 23 December 2005 at 11:20am |
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Originally posted by Shark that wood doesnt really look like pixel art, seeing as there over 150 shades of brown. try looking at others techniques rather than brushes or filters or something. this is a great example of wood  hehe thanks and yeah you need only a few colours for wood maybe 3-4. |
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jalonso
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Posted: 01 January 2006 at 9:28pm |
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you have a creat concept/idea here but you are straying from the goal. the last version looks like a funeral parlor it even has a corpse! lighten the wall back to the second version make the floor less distracting (a museum/gallery never distracts from the artwork) dim the lights and light up the art, not the wall as you have done. also maybe put a simple bench in the middle of the room.
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EvilBoogiemanX
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Joined: 03 January 2006 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 23 |
Posted: 03 January 2006 at 9:08pm |
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The people look pretty good, but try having more than 2 hair styles.
All i see are short hair and long hair. Try making some spiky, some
skater, someone with a hat on or something. Also you could try changing
the clothes a bit, like have somebody have a leather cloak/jacket on or
something like that. Looks pretty good though, good job so far.
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Souly
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Posted: 04 January 2006 at 11:13am |
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You need red lines around the mummy, like a bank has to keep people in line...
Hope you know what I mean. Also, what make it more convincing that it's a museum is to have a tour guide and a bunch of rowdy children. Edited by Souly |
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Shark
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a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
Posted: 04 January 2006 at 11:50pm |
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I think the paintings should be bigger.
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