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Brevr
Seaman
Joined: 04 August 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 12 |
![]() Topic: WIP - beat 'em up spritePosted: 20 October 2011 at 12:15pm |
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Hey there Just looking for a quick critique on this sprite before I star the animations for it. Thanks in advance!
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Commander
Joined: 01 April 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 710 |
![]() Posted: 20 October 2011 at 12:30pm |
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wow, the jeans look great. The torso and hair don't look quite as "finished", and his left fist has a slight readability issue. At first sight it looks as if his wrist and hand is bent completely backwards, and his fingers are pointing to the right. Maybe move the curl of the fist more to the center, and shape the fingers a tad so they are more noticeable and not just a small rectangle
Edited by Frost Butt - 20 October 2011 at 12:30pm |
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Brevr
Seaman
Joined: 04 August 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 12 |
![]() Posted: 20 October 2011 at 12:59pm |
I touched it up a bit, but I still cannot decode on what to do for the jacket, shading wise. The jeans were a breeze to do but for whatever reason I'm stumped here |
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mase0ne
Midshipman
Joined: 08 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 49 |
![]() Posted: 20 October 2011 at 8:36pm |
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Here are some more ideas. I softened the outlines of the flesh and hair. I also changed the eyes up a bit - the full black lower lids seemed a bit heavy.
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Brevr
Seaman
Joined: 04 August 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 12 |
![]() Posted: 21 October 2011 at 8:47am |
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Great thank you both for the help! :)
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