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AlexHW
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Topic: Fish
Posted: 21 October 2011 at 9:54pm

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AlexHW
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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 10:20pm

update

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AlexHW
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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 2:34am

here's an update, fixed the leg

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Damian
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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 3:19am

Fish on steroids! I feel his quads and calf's should be just that bit bigger to make him look more balanced. I love the tail, it almost looks like a cape or something in that essence. Again upper body looks superb and I cant find anything wrong with that.

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AlexHW
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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 4:12pm

yea :) i was actually imagining it like a cape flowing..
here's an update.

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reis
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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 4:52pm

Only some details are missing near the mouth of the fish.

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Partack
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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 4:42am

This is awesome

Can't really add much to the conversation, not entirely sure where you're going with this.

All I can say is when I first looked at the piece I couldn't discern that the fish had a big left shoulder connected to the small arm.. I don't know why but it just didn't click and so the small arm looked like it was WAY out of place, like it was supposed to be more to the right or something.. (kinda how trogdor the burninator has an arm sticking out of its back )

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then I studied it further and realised it had a bulging shoulder muscle and then the out of place arm made sense. perhaps the bulging shoulder is a little TOO bulging? which is causing the arm to look out of place anatomically? just a small suggestion submitted for your approval.

Great work though. awesome colours, great anatomy, great pose, the animation is really smooth the cute smirk on the fish's face is priceless, all round good job.

Edited by Partack - 23 October 2011 at 4:44am

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Hapiel
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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 6:57am

Well done on using magenta ;)

On the tail part that is between the crotch there is a part that goes up and down 2 frames after each other (look closely, youll understand) but I assume that you will notice and fix this when you color in. For the rest this is way beyond a level where I can give proper critique :D

Keep on going :)

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HotDog
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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 7:55am

Great choice of colors. Love the animation

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Christoballs
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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 1:15pm

it would look less odd if the fin on its head moved too.

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mase0ne
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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 7:18am

^ Agreed. Are you going to animate the body, too?

Dude's been hitting the gym!

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AlexHW Commander Joined: 19 June 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 285	Topic: Fish Posted: 21 October 2011 at 9:54pm

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AlexHW Commander Joined: 19 June 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 285	Posted: 21 October 2011 at 10:20pm
	update
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AlexHW Commander Joined: 19 June 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 285	Posted: 22 October 2011 at 2:34am
	here's an update, fixed the leg
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Damian Commander Joined: 24 February 2023 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 455	Posted: 22 October 2011 at 3:19am
	Fish on steroids! I feel his quads and calf's should be just that bit bigger to make him look more balanced. I love the tail, it almost looks like a cape or something in that essence. Again upper body looks superb and I cant find anything wrong with that.
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AlexHW Commander Joined: 19 June 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 285	Posted: 22 October 2011 at 4:12pm
	yea :) i was actually imagining it like a cape flowing.. here's an update.
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reis Commander Joined: 13 March 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 118	Posted: 22 October 2011 at 4:52pm
	Only some details are missing near the mouth of the fish.
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Partack Commander Joined: 20 October 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 260	Posted: 23 October 2011 at 4:42am
	This is awesome Can't really add much to the conversation, not entirely sure where you're going with this. All I can say is when I first looked at the piece I couldn't discern that the fish had a big left shoulder connected to the small arm.. I don't know why but it just didn't click and so the small arm looked like it was WAY out of place, like it was supposed to be more to the right or something.. (kinda how trogdor the burninator has an arm sticking out of its back ) () then I studied it further and realised it had a bulging shoulder muscle and then the out of place arm made sense. perhaps the bulging shoulder is a little TOO bulging? which is causing the arm to look out of place anatomically? just a small suggestion submitted for your approval. Great work though. awesome colours, great anatomy, great pose, the animation is really smooth the cute smirk on the fish's face is priceless, all round good job. Edited by Partack - 23 October 2011 at 4:44am
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 23 October 2011 at 6:57am
	Well done on using magenta ;) On the tail part that is between the crotch there is a part that goes up and down 2 frames after each other (look closely, youll understand) but I assume that you will notice and fix this when you color in. For the rest this is way beyond a level where I can give proper critique :D Keep on going :)
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HotDog Seaman Joined: 16 February 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20	Posted: 23 October 2011 at 7:55am
	Great choice of colors. Love the animation
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Christoballs Rear Admiral Joined: 31 January 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 182	Posted: 23 October 2011 at 1:15pm
	it would look less odd if the fin on its head moved too.
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mase0ne Midshipman Joined: 08 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 49	Posted: 24 October 2011 at 7:18am
	^ Agreed. Are you going to animate the body, too? Dude's been hitting the gym!
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Topic: Fish