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I would like someone to crit before I start the final piece. :3

Like anatomy and other.

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Touching everything Seaman Joined: 07 February 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Topic: [NPA] Posted: 08 February 2012 at 3:51pm
	I would like someone to crit before I start the final piece. :3 Like anatomy and other.
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Touching everything Seaman Joined: 07 February 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 08 February 2012 at 8:51pm
	I fixed it a bit, like cleaner lines so it would be easier... I guess.
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 08 January 2026 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 08 February 2012 at 10:07pm
	Your arm is too long, and both your legs have different lengths.
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tanuki Commander Joined: 01 April 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 333	Posted: 08 February 2012 at 10:53pm
	The right/back foot needs to be turned a bit to point more towards the viewer or have the heel tilted upwards. Maybe I just need to start doing yoga again, but if you try standing in that pose yourself with your back foot flat on the ground and pointing forward you'll see and feel that your foot won't be able to stay like that for long without straining your ankle a little to do it.
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Touching everything Seaman Joined: 07 February 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 09 February 2012 at 3:49pm
	Okay, I'll fix that!
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ChrisButton Commander Joined: 10 September 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 371	Posted: 09 February 2012 at 9:52pm
	He's gonna fall over standing like that!
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Touching everything Seaman Joined: 07 February 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 10 February 2012 at 2:42pm
	So, are you saying the whole position is off? Or his feet,leg position or just the angle of almost everything?
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