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Mngwa
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Quote Mngwa Replybullet Topic: Revision needed - mistake?
    Posted: 11 February 2012 at 1:10am
Hello, I have posted picture on gallery, it has been in query for a long time and recently it wants revision because of background



BG is gray to fit the gallery site, so I don't understand what's wrong. The posted image here is actually one frame of many in animation of yawning man.







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Quote jeremy Replybullet Posted: 11 February 2012 at 2:48am
There are many themes people can choose from.
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Quote Mngwa Replybullet Posted: 11 February 2012 at 3:54am
How is that related to my question?
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Quote jeremy Replybullet Posted: 11 February 2012 at 4:01am
"BG is grey to fit the gallery site"

It doesn't fit every theme. Your pieces are almost entirely outlined in black, so there's no reason for the background to be there.
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Quote Mngwa Replybullet Posted: 11 February 2012 at 5:19am
I finally found how to make transparent color to fit theme, thanks for advice


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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 11 February 2012 at 12:07pm
personally I would have revised it on quality lines. you've got a really messy outline that jumps from 1 to 2 pixels in width randomly, the shield is jaggy, black outlines are being overused and flattening the sprite. and contrast in your palette is generally too low. those large formless feet are rather awkward as well.

I've seen firsthand that you're capable of better constructed, cleaner work.


Edited by cure - 11 February 2012 at 12:08pm
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