Pixel Joint Forum: Pixel Octopus

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Very Early, Just planning need some cc, BE BRUTAL i can take:)This is my first Draft, Establishing my lines


Edited by lazyjoker - 22 April 2012 at 10:04pm

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lazyjoker Seaman Joined: 04 January 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9	Topic: Pixel Octopus Posted: 10 March 2012 at 3:52pm
	Very Early, Just planning need some cc, BE BRUTAL i can take:)This is my first Draft, Establishing my lines Edited by lazyjoker - 22 April 2012 at 10:04pm
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echocharliepapa Seaman Joined: 06 March 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 27	Posted: 10 March 2012 at 4:42pm
	the darker tentacles are the back ones, right? they kind of look strange because they are the same size or larger than the front ones. i would make them a (tiny) bit smaller, and probably make that bottom left tentacle not quite so bottlenecked where it joins the body, and the far right one could be a little more obviously behind the one above it (like if they were overlapped a little like the ones on the other side. also, the spots on the body should probably be a different tone from the suckers on the tentacles, maybe something a little closer to the main body color? i'd definitely like to see more once you start polishing.
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lazyjoker Seaman Joined: 04 January 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9	Posted: 10 March 2012 at 9:35pm
	Ok Update 1. Fixed up some lines, changed some colors. todo: shadowing,texture,suckers,spots(properly),nicer-cleaner lines. @echocharliepapa thanks for the advice. Im still working on overlap on right though. Eyes are weird also. Edited by lazyjoker - 10 March 2012 at 9:37pm
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H\|F Commander Joined: 14 March 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 363	Posted: 11 March 2012 at 10:29pm
	You have a bunch of Jaggies (unclean lines)
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