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    Posted: 22 March 2012 at 5:40am
I was working on this little low-res drawing
I think something is missing for the composition so I'm looking for advices:



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Quote pwei Replybullet Posted: 22 March 2012 at 12:35pm
There are certain technical details I really like about this -- the blue palette, the tree shape and the cloud textures.

I think it might work better if you move the sun someplace more noticeable (I didn't see it at first glance). Composition wise, you want to create an interesting visual dynamic in how the sun, relief and tree balance each other. The darker and lighter blues don't really work, nor does the green. You have an opportunity to use the texture of the sky to create movement and visual interest but as is right now it's not very interesting.

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Quote Partack Replybullet Posted: 22 March 2012 at 3:02pm
Originally posted by pwei

Composition wise, you want to create an interesting visual dynamic in how the sun, relief and tree balance each other. The darker and lighter blues don't really work, nor does the green. You have an opportunity to use the texture of the sky to create movement and visual interest but as is right now it's not very interesting.


I was going to say that.. U___U;    Just kidding.
Composition is one of my weakest points and have no idea what your piece needs..

just wanted to say i love the clouds. good luck!

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