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    Posted: 28 May 2012 at 11:49pm
Hey, could I get some feedback about this piece I'm currently working on? Some segments are more finished than others, and I'm wondering if it's working in the more developed areas. Any critique is welcome. Thanks


EDIT: Updated a little bit.

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Quote toxotes Replybullet Posted: 29 May 2012 at 10:14pm
Update, and a fairly significant one:



Any feedback as I finish up this piece? Nitpick away :)

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Quote Mille Replybullet Posted: 31 May 2012 at 3:26pm
No much to critique here, I can say that the composition isn't working that well though. A quick effective thing you could do would be to put that panel with the arm on the left and put it to the right, it should balance it.
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