Hi, I've been working hard on this character for quite some time now. He has definitely transformed a lot. I would like to know if anyone see any problems with this picture or have any suggestions as to how i can improve this character if any. Thank you

The first image is where I started



The second from the left is the first character I made. Then i ended up with the one furthest to the right.

Next is what I've narrowed it down to as far as how I would like for him to look inside games and what not.




and the final revision is the following image. This is the one I want the most critic on however feel free to suggest anything toward the others as well. Thanks




p.s. please dont steal

Edited by Vell123 - 02 September 2012 at 5:44pm

Thank you. I took a lot of tutorial reading and examination of other peoples work for me to realize to work on it...If you was having him stand you'd make his legs aligned with his torso?

Thanks I'll definitely put that into consideration. The illusion of the left leg does look a bit strange now that its brought to my attention. and I'm a developer as well. Im making this guy for a game. I normally do most of the programming but now im doing the sprites, tilesets, etc. Also Thanks for the compliment. He has come a long way. Someone revised him from what I started with but I revised that and this is what I ended up with near the end. I play to make a game similar to this.....http://ps3media.ign.com/ps3/image/article/111/1117984/castle-crashers-20100902050138751-001.jpg so I though the left leg being in the back ground was suitable.   

Yeah I can say the same, it is nice to know im not the only developer here. Actually thats a negative on the weapons, simply because the writer hasnt really given me anything to work with as far as a story because I was hoping to make a kind of mix between beat em up and rpg game. I had like this epiphany today while getting ready for work about how I think the game play should be...however I do have like a tileset i made from a previous tutorial from devianart.com

Here is a simple update, the one on furthest to the right. The female character I was basing him off of. And basically I wanted him to be like a teenager. The middle image makes him look like a boy to me and the furthest left he looks like a man with a full chin.




Here is a tileset and the original drawing of the character I was going to make. He was a very low resolution character







Edited by Vell123 - 03 September 2012 at 1:54pm

Ok Ill definitely do that. Since I feel like I'm getting more comfortable drawing on the pc

Most recent update as of 9/6/12





Edited by Vell123 - 05 September 2012 at 9:22pm

Yea i'm definitely satisfied