Pixel Joint Forum: Main dude

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   Hello all. I'm trying my hand at a hack and slash sidescroller and would love some C+C before I go any further.

This here is the main man that has no name.

Edited by Shon7291 - 06 April 2013 at 4:40pm

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Shon7291 Seaman Joined: 27 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 12	Topic: Main dude Posted: 06 April 2013 at 4:40pm
	Hello all. I'm trying my hand at a hack and slash sidescroller and would love some C+C before I go any further. This here is the main man that has no name. Edited by Shon7291 - 06 April 2013 at 4:40pm
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 06 April 2013 at 6:25pm
	Nice and clean. My only crit is the strength of red color which can read as if he's wearing a girl's red bikini. Ignore, if he's meant to be pervy.
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showtime Commander Joined: 14 May 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 105	Posted: 06 April 2013 at 7:31pm
	I feel like the arms could be a touch longer, right now they look like they only go down to the hip. And I agree with Jal about that red.
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Shon7291 Seaman Joined: 27 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 12	Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:10am
	Round 2 Lengthened the arms by a pixel and dulled the red quite a bit. Once that bikini thing was pointed out, I couldn't not notice it and I had to change it. Haha
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Friend Commander Joined: 01 April 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 710	Posted: 07 April 2013 at 10:47am
	looks good. Could use some shading to make it not so flat
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