Pixel Joint Forum: Wiisps

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   I've done Wisps sprite from the Wii version of Sonic Colors and wanted to know everyone's opinions on them. I'm not trying to make the prettiest PA, I want them to stay recognizable even from up close.

Credit to Sonicman98 for the Lazer Wisp that i took and recolored because I liked his design. All the others are mine.

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Numberplay Commander Joined: 28 October 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 130	Topic: Wiisps Posted: 19 May 2013 at 7:01am
	I've done Wisps sprite from the Wii version of Sonic Colors and wanted to know everyone's opinions on them. I'm not trying to make the prettiest PA, I want them to stay recognizable even from up close. Credit to Sonicman98 for the Lazer Wisp that i took and recolored because I liked his design. All the others are mine.
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Numberplay Commander Joined: 28 October 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 130	Posted: 21 May 2013 at 7:52am
	I was hoping for some useful tips or suggestions. Well I'll give you the single sprites in hope I get something this time. I used google search as reference for them. Edited by Numberplay - 21 May 2013 at 7:52am
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 21 May 2013 at 9:36am
	The coloring is weak and just kinda pillow shaded. Try recoloring while you focus on the forms. They should improve vastly if you do.
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onek Commander Joined: 19 May 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 416	Posted: 21 May 2013 at 11:07am
	agreed with jalonso... the sprites itself are quite nice and have a cute look to them but ur technique is a bit poor... look up some tutorials (especially the one by cure in the ressources section of this forum ) to learn a thing or two about coloring and specific pixel art techniques on this small of a scale it is very important how u place ur pixels and having only one in the wrong place can make a huge difference... heres an edit where i was trying to control the pixels a bit better
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Numberplay Commander Joined: 28 October 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 130	Posted: 21 May 2013 at 11:07am
	Is that going in the right direction? -> -> I want to keep the outline though. @Onek It's no longer recognizable. You made it too fat and the colors contrasts too much. Link Edited by Numberplay - 21 May 2013 at 11:11am
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onek Commander Joined: 19 May 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 416	Posted: 21 May 2013 at 11:26am
	k. didnt know these are of a reference... sry... keep it up m8
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