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hellotherekyle
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Quote hellotherekyle Replybullet Topic: Sci fi Pilot
    Posted: 23 May 2013 at 6:16pm
Hey people this is my first post here, and only my fourth piece of pixel art I've ever made. If anyone could help me out with anything I've done wrong or should change it'd be much appreciated! Also, how are his proportions so far? I've only put a few hours into it so far and I plan on adding a lot more detail with shading and such.

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Quote Stevie Replybullet Posted: 23 May 2013 at 6:23pm
Oh my god what is this crap?!? Just kidding, what's up Kyle? Looks good so far, though I'll let the veterans on here do the proper critiquing. One thing I'll say, you're way better at  drawing the human figure than I am.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 23 May 2013 at 6:23pm
You are off to a great start. Anatomy is more that fine and that is key. If anything the chest is far too straight on as indicated by the arms.

Design wise a 3/4 face might be more interesting than a side view?


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Quote hellotherekyle Replybullet Posted: 24 May 2013 at 8:50am
Thanks Jalonso, I'll keep working on it and try to draw a head in 3/4, good idea! And Steve, I dunno about that. . You're an excellent artist.
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Quote hellotherekyle Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2013 at 11:06am
So I've animated him a little bit. The reason I kept his head at the side is cause I was kinda thinking of putting him into a 2D sidescroller, so he should be looking sideways (I think?).

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Quote Stevie Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2013 at 6:03pm
That look great Kyle. Can't wait to see more.
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Quote hellotherekyle Replybullet Posted: 25 May 2013 at 7:09pm
Thanks Steve, I'll try to work on it some more tomorrow!
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