Pixel Joint Forum: Sci fi Pilot

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   Hey people this is my first post here, and only my fourth piece of pixel art I've ever made. If anyone could help me out with anything I've done wrong or should change it'd be much appreciated! Also, how are his proportions so far? I've only put a few hours into it so far and I plan on adding a lot more detail with shading and such.

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hellotherekyle Midshipman Joined: 28 October 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46	Topic: Sci fi Pilot Posted: 23 May 2013 at 6:16pm
	Hey people this is my first post here, and only my fourth piece of pixel art I've ever made. If anyone could help me out with anything I've done wrong or should change it'd be much appreciated! Also, how are his proportions so far? I've only put a few hours into it so far and I plan on adding a lot more detail with shading and such.
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Stevie Seaman Joined: 20 May 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14	Posted: 23 May 2013 at 6:23pm
	Oh my god what is this crap?!? Just kidding, what's up Kyle? Looks good so far, though I'll let the veterans on here do the proper critiquing. One thing I'll say, you're way better at drawing the human figure than I am.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 23 May 2013 at 6:23pm
	You are off to a great start. Anatomy is more that fine and that is key. If anything the chest is far too straight on as indicated by the arms. Design wise a 3/4 face might be more interesting than a side view? Edited by jalonso - 23 May 2013 at 6:24pm
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hellotherekyle Midshipman Joined: 28 October 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46	Posted: 24 May 2013 at 8:50am
	Thanks Jalonso, I'll keep working on it and try to draw a head in 3/4, good idea! And Steve, I dunno about that. . You're an excellent artist.
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hellotherekyle Midshipman Joined: 28 October 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46	Posted: 25 May 2013 at 11:06am
	So I've animated him a little bit. The reason I kept his head at the side is cause I was kinda thinking of putting him into a 2D sidescroller, so he should be looking sideways (I think?).
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Stevie Seaman Joined: 20 May 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14	Posted: 25 May 2013 at 6:03pm
	That look great Kyle. Can't wait to see more.
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hellotherekyle Midshipman Joined: 28 October 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46	Posted: 25 May 2013 at 7:09pm
	Thanks Steve, I'll try to work on it some more tomorrow!
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