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mrspixel
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Quote mrspixel Replybullet Topic: Feedback on my Walrus
    Posted: 19 June 2013 at 3:38pm
Hello.
So I'm new to the board and I came here to improve my pixeling skills like the others. Right now I'm working on a sprite sheet for this walrus I made; however, I need feedback.

Here he is...


Thanks!
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Quote Nppsf Replybullet Posted: 19 June 2013 at 4:47pm
The coloring looks really good.

I think the shape of the animal is kind of weird. Like the head is really big, and the tail and flippers arent well defined.

Looks cool though!
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Quote Kurieta Replybullet Posted: 19 June 2013 at 6:33pm
Personally I would make the tusks a few pixels longer. But either way, it looks awesome :)
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 20 June 2013 at 7:17am
Could use a little more contrast, and the dithering is unnecessary. light source is pretty indeterminate.
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