new lineart based of a sketch.

i also hated those legs, they were based on another sketch i did and i
guess they didnt match up, they also seemed muscle-less compared
to his beastly torso.

I thought so too when the original pencil sketch was up, but its even more pronounced now. I think that if the flame looking pointy thingys were to drape over the face (back some , then out) it would help add dimesion to the face. Also the abs are too wide perhaps, they seem to go all the way to his(or her :D) side.

Shark I see were you drew inspiration from:





Edited by jalonso

alrighty - it was fun working on this a bit.

yours ---> mine


main differences:
1) i moved the torso down into the legs more (it was way off in yours)
2) I fixed the abdomen (its called a 'six pack' for a reason)
3) I quickly blocked in the arms to a new, more natural position (you can touch up the muscle shapes much more than i have there)

there are quite a few other things that i did, but i'll just let the edit do the talking.  I can tell that you purposely tried to make the torso oversized compared to the lower body, so i still kept that style in my edit.  the face was just for fun.

as for the good things; i'm glad you making such an effort in anatomy.  most people dont care that much and just 'wing it'.  I especially liked how you showed the different muscle groups in the deltoid- most people dont do that let alone know that they exist.  I still changed them however, because they were oversized to the picture - even with the exagerrated size of the torso.  the other thing that i found almost perfect was the upper leg muscles (or the quads).  I didn't even bother editing them since you did such a good job.

have fun, hope it helps
-Dan-


Edited by Indigo

That is sweet...
Shark you have some skills... so does indigo...
way to go.. Collab Line Art... I like it
now let's see some color?

Hey indigo NICE. The only thing I see wrong is the size of his lower legs...