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neike60
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Topic: My zelda sprites
Posted: 16 August 2013 at 5:55pm

Hello.

Here my link and my HUD.

I would like to know what you guys think.

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Shon7291
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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 6:01pm

That's actually really good. No complaints from me.

Edited by Shon7291 - 16 August 2013 at 6:01pm

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neike60
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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 6:01pm

Thank.

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Adcrusher
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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 8:56pm

Hey, these are quite good! I especially like the weapon sprites, nice use of colors.

I think your biggest problem here is readability. I feel like your trying to pack too much detail into too small of a sprite. Your best bet is to simplify to increase readability. The shield on the back sprite is probably the worst case of this, but none of it is that bad really. You also have some banding going on in a few places, giving it a few minutes and cleaning that up will make the sprite look a lot nicer. Here's an edit of a the front view for you.

Your use of black seemed a bit weird, it was difficult to figure out why you were using it in the places you did. I didn't mess with that too much in my edit.

Nice sprites and good luck!
- Adcrusher

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neike60
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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 9:23pm

Thank.

I like the modification you had done. I see what u mean with me using to much detail. For the black it was my first time without using it to much. Here my fisrt version.

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Edited by neike60 - 16 August 2013 at 11:23pm

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YuanHao
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 4:00am

Damn, really nice. Would love to play this game on my DS :( haha (instead of the 3D counterpart zeldas) would love to see an animated version!

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neike60
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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 8:26pm

Thank.

Here is the master sword room:

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The one on the right is my version from 2012.

Edited by neike60 - 19 August 2013 at 8:50pm

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Xhukari
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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 4:48am

Wow, I would love to play a game with these graphics! I simply love it! :)

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neike60
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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 7:21pm

Thank.

Here a mockup with my sprites tests.

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neike60 Seaman Joined: 16 August 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Topic: My zelda sprites Posted: 16 August 2013 at 5:55pm
	Hello. Here my link and my HUD. I would like to know what you guys think.
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Shon7291 Seaman Joined: 27 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 12	Posted: 16 August 2013 at 6:01pm
	That's actually really good. No complaints from me. Edited by Shon7291 - 16 August 2013 at 6:01pm
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neike60 Seaman Joined: 16 August 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 16 August 2013 at 6:01pm
	Thank.
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Adcrusher Commander Joined: 04 January 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 148	Posted: 16 August 2013 at 8:56pm
	Hey, these are quite good! I especially like the weapon sprites, nice use of colors. I think your biggest problem here is readability. I feel like your trying to pack too much detail into too small of a sprite. Your best bet is to simplify to increase readability. The shield on the back sprite is probably the worst case of this, but none of it is that bad really. You also have some banding going on in a few places, giving it a few minutes and cleaning that up will make the sprite look a lot nicer. Here's an edit of a the front view for you. Your use of black seemed a bit weird, it was difficult to figure out why you were using it in the places you did. I didn't mess with that too much in my edit. Nice sprites and good luck! - Adcrusher
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neike60 Seaman Joined: 16 August 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 16 August 2013 at 9:23pm
	Thank. I like the modification you had done. I see what u mean with me using to much detail. For the black it was my first time without using it to much. Here my fisrt version. </a> Edit: Edited by neike60 - 16 August 2013 at 11:23pm
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YuanHao Seaman Joined: 18 November 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Posted: 17 August 2013 at 4:00am
	Damn, really nice. Would love to play this game on my DS :( haha (instead of the 3D counterpart zeldas) would love to see an animated version!
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neike60 Seaman Joined: 16 August 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 19 August 2013 at 8:26pm
	Thank. Here is the master sword room: </a> The one on the right is my version from 2012. Edited by neike60 - 19 August 2013 at 8:50pm
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Xhukari Commander Joined: 22 June 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 106	Posted: 20 August 2013 at 4:48am
	Wow, I would love to play a game with these graphics! I simply love it! :)
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neike60 Seaman Joined: 16 August 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 20 August 2013 at 7:21pm
	Thank. Here a mockup with my sprites tests.
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