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BathMaster_2000
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Quote BathMaster_2000 Replybullet Topic: Sci-Fi Soldier
    Posted: 13 November 2014 at 6:08am
I've been working on this guy for a couple hours now.



Any things glaring that I need to fix?
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Quote DrTripwire Replybullet Posted: 13 November 2014 at 8:01am
I think there could be a bit more contrast, as well as a bit of fiddling with the left - our right - leg. Not sure if it would be so turned out. Other than that, not bad! I like the mostly-monochrome look.
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Quote eishiya Replybullet Posted: 13 November 2014 at 8:10am
The forms are hard to read because it looks like you're shading each shape as its own thing instead of connected body parts. Think of each arm as a bent cylinder, same for each leg. You can think of the knees as sort of like ball joints - they should continue the highlights of the parts they connect instead of being in shadow.
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Quote Limes Replybullet Posted: 13 November 2014 at 12:18pm
Colors seem flushed out make that a VERY bright blue.
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