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Quote Reo Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 4:35am
Originally posted by Krugelix

I've tried to improve it a bit. Any suggestions, coments or critic?


You might want to bring in some more of the purple into the floor, since both of your neighbors have it.

Calling this done

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Quote Asmodeusss Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 4:47am
If I may, I would like to reserve tile #8 once it becomes available(if it currently is not, since I assume I am not allowed to do anything until #15 is done). I would like to make it connect the portal from #66.

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Quote Reo Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 4:53am
@Asmodeuss the windows in #52 look pretty sloppy and blocky some dithering would seal the deal on those.
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Quote Asmodeusss Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 6:11am
@Reo You mean the left side ones?
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 6:16am
Originally posted by Reo



Calling this done


So there's only 1 tile left to make all existing tiles connected.

Main image updated.
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 6:22am
Originally posted by Asmodeusss

If I may, I would like to reserve tile #8 once it becomes available(if it currently is not, since I assume I am not allowed to do anything until #15 is done). I would like to make it connect the portal from #66.


True, until it has a complete neighbor (with a border, diagonals not counted for this purpose) it's unavailable.

Also another note for border tiles. If your next neighbor is already done, you can invade whatever empty pixels they have left (e.g. if you pick 8, you can enter 7's empty space. But do it without touching their pixels too much. So for example if you have a tentacle monster there, its 1 tentacle can go to the next tile a little.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 6:30am
Originally posted by Gecimen

...Also another note for border tiles. If your next neighbor is already done, you can invade whatever empty pixels they have left (e.g. if you pick 8, you can enter 7's empty space. But do it without touching their pixels too much. So for example if you have a tentacle monster there, its 1 tentacle can go to the next tile a little.


Only what's clear. NO covering or editing of the neighbors tile. Not even 1 pixel!
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Quote Asmodeusss Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 7:50am
Originally posted by jalonso


Originally posted by Gecimen


...Also another note for border tiles. If your next neighbor is already done, you can invade whatever empty pixels they have left (e.g. if you pick 8, you can enter 7's empty space. But do it without touching their pixels too much. So for example if you have a tentacle monster there, its 1 tentacle can go to the next tile a little.
Only what's clear. NO covering or editing of the neighbors tile. Not even 1 pixel!

What about HALF a pixel?
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Quote Mirre Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 8:05am
Originally posted by Asmodeusss

If I may, I would like to reserve tile #8 once it becomes available(if it currently is not, since I assume I am not allowed to do anything until #15 is done). I would like to make it connect the portal from #66.

Umm, I am working on a mini collab thing for that corner. I don't think I will finish it as fast as my other tiles either since I am also doing a freelance job right now. #26 would be a great place to connect the portal from #56 though? :)
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Quote Asmodeusss Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 8:26am
Originally posted by Mirre


Originally posted by Asmodeusss

If I may, I would like to reserve tile #8 once it becomes available(if it currently is not, since I assume I am not allowed to do anything until #15 is done). I would like to make it connect the portal from #66.

Umm, I am working on a mini collab thing for that corner. I don't think I will finish it as fast as my other tiles either since I am also doing a freelance job right now. #26 would be a great place to connect the portal from #56 though? :)

So, like, you want the corner? Ok sure. May I ask, what's the freelance job? :^)
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 8:54am
What will the mini collab be like? :)
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 9:20am
Originally posted by Krugelix


I've tried to improve it a bit. Any suggestions, coments or critic?


Your tile perspective is 'ok-ish' because front facing in iso is fine.
However, I find your tile very flat and 2D where ISO is inherently a mock 3D.
I think you can tweak it a bit to make the perspective fit better.
In the first edit I show you a true iso version of your 'whatever it is' where the brain and eye are in 2:1 iso grid and the shine (red lines).
In the second edit I'm showing you front facing but in an iso grid too which is basically what you already have except the eyes are lowered to the grid and the shine (red lines) conform to the grid too yet front facing.
This is a suggestion and tip on iso pixelart in general and I suppose I do not object to what you already made since it was already accepted as legit.
I personally would not have accepted :p
Note that the shine could also be just 2D like you made but its center would still be moved to the center point of the red lines I show in iso.
Also note that you can move the center point of the red lines as wanted to fit your idea. For example if the shine is coming from the eyes itself you can move the red lines to the eyes.

I have also edited and finished my tile #12 so if you would please add the legs of my table to your tile :)



@Gecimen and all my neighbors. My tile #12 updated and complete and totally boring (palette cleanser tile) because every neighbor tile of mine has awesomeness so I'll razzle-dazzle on my next tile.

@Drazile, will you complete the blue bolt where the arrow is :)


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Quote Mirre Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 9:55am
@Asmodeusss: No, no, I can't even take that since it will touch my tile. Part of the collab will be in the tile. It is more that if you are itching to start on the portal then maybe it's better to chose a different tile since it will take a few days to a week depending on how much time I have to work on it.
It is a scientific illustration for an article in a magazine. Funny, right?

@Gecimen: A rocket being launched into space! If I can pull it off, haha. If not I will think of something else.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 10:05am
Reserving #25

Originally posted by Schazer

...May I take 17 instead?


Any WIP to show?


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Quote Asmodeusss Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 11:06am
@Mirre that sounds cool. Ok, I will take something else once I figure out where else I would want to paint my stuff.
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 3:28pm
Originally posted by Schazer





Jal, this is Schazer's WIP.

But as I say to all others, just do your thing and let the latecomers fit to your tile. Otherwise it's always deadlock.
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 3:30pm
Originally posted by Mirre

@Gecimen: A rocket being launched into space! If I can pull it off, haha. If not I will think of something else.


I will definitely take part in it! Can't wait :) Will it be realistic or a fantastic one?
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Quote Drazile Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 4:20pm

Small fix for Jal.
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Quote DawnBringer Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 5:59pm
@Drazile: As mentioned earlier; green does not interpolate the gray and purple/indigo. And why not ramp up the specularities on the rounded metal?
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Quote Drazile Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2015 at 6:55pm
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@Drazile: As mentioned earlier; green does not interpolate the gray and purple/indigo. And why not ramp up the specularities on the rounded metal?


With my visual perception, the green does interpolate, and I may up the highlights later.
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Quote Krugelix Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2015 at 12:11am
Originally posted by Reo

You might want to bring in some more of the purple into the floor, since both of your neighbors have it.
 
 
Originally posted by jalonso

Your tile perspective is 'ok-ish' because front facing in iso is fine.
However, I find your tile very flat and 2D where ISO is inherently a mock 3D.
I think you can tweak it a bit to make the perspective fit better.
In the first edit I show you a true iso version of your 'whatever it is' where the brain and eye are in 2:1 iso grid and the shine (red lines).
In the second edit I'm showing you front facing but in an iso grid too which is basically what you already have except the eyes are lowered to the grid and the shine (red lines) conform to the grid too yet front facing.
This is a suggestion and tip on iso pixelart in general and I suppose I do not object to what you already made since it was already accepted as legit.
I personally would not have accepted :p
Note that the shine could also be just 2D like you made but its center would still be moved to the center point of the red lines I show in iso.
Also note that you can move the center point of the red lines as wanted to fit your idea. For example if the shine is coming from the eyes itself you can move the red lines to the eyes.

I have also edited and finished my tile #12 so if you would please add the legs of my table to your tile :)

Thanks for the advice and help.
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Quote Asmodeusss Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2015 at 4:43am
Once 34 is done, can I have 42 please?
My tile has to end with a 2
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Quote darchangel Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2015 at 2:00pm
Tile 57: Don't step on the slimelings



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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2015 at 3:15pm
@Krugelix. I feel a little bad about crits with your tile now.
You pixel well and your update is terrific but I think it lost its dynamics with the 'flares' gone and I hope it wasn't my doing :(
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Quote ClownAround Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2015 at 3:27pm
Hey everyone. I would like to reserve tile #81 if I may. Thanks.
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Quote Mega_19 Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2015 at 5:08pm
almost finished, just a few more things to add.



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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2015 at 5:51pm
Great tiles guys!

Main image updated.
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Quote Mega_19 Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2015 at 7:07pm
i call this done, unless someone has some cc for it.



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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2015 at 7:14pm
Mega19, what's the blue lines supposed to be? Just grout in between or is that electricity or lights?
You need some ground shadows too ;)
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Quote Mega_19 Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2015 at 9:56pm
Jal, well i can say that is a "lighted-grout"(sorry i dont know how to explain this correctly, im still learning english xd)
and i did a small edit with the ground shadows, is this better?




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Quote Drazile Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2015 at 10:35pm
@Mega_19

Now we have Mother Brain and a metroid :D
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Quote Mega_19 Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2015 at 10:57pm
@Drazile: I know yay :D
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 3:33am
Originally posted by Mega_19

Jal, well i can say that is a "lighted-grout"(sorry i dont know how to explain this correctly, im still learning english xd)
and i did a small edit with the ground shadows, is this better?




Shadow is in the wrong direction.
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Quote Schazer Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 6:16am
Sorry for the radio silence; work kicked me in the face and left me too tired to stare at pixels once I got home.

Here's my wip; I'm super-new at this so I'd prefer to not step on toes and I can change my edges to fit whatever the people around me do (I guess I'll need to work in those colored cables from the top of 32?)

Either way C+C much appreciated if anyone has the time to give it.

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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 9:27am
Great job Schazer. I was just working on my tile which neighbors yours. I tried not to get into your tile but it seems the chair and the metal box will jump in :p

Notice the purple and green pipe on the very corner from the tile below jumps into your tile a bit :/



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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 9:39am
Originally posted by Mega_19

Jal, well i can say that is a "lighted-grout"(sorry i dont know how to explain this correctly, im still learning english xd)
and i did a small edit with the ground shadows, is this better?




I see. Like 'Tron'.
Maybe to add some more depth you could make the floor change level by making the purple floor a little higher by one step or two.
Also the shadows should be more like this.



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Quote Mega_19 Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 10:32am
jal, is this better?



i call this done

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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 10:34am
To me, yes.
Adding that little bit of height makes the whole tile less flat, right?
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Quote CuriousBeefJerky Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 10:40am
May I reserve tile 96?
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 11:00am
Originally posted by CuriousBeefJerky

May I reserve tile 96?



96 is not quite available yet but it should be real soon. Mega_19 is almost done for now.
You can go ahead and start working on it I think.
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 1:45pm
Originally posted by Schazer

Sorry for the radio silence; work kicked me in the face and left me too tired to stare at pixels once I got home.

Here's my wip; I'm super-new at this so I'd prefer to not step on toes and I can change my edges to fit whatever the people around me do (I guess I'll need to work in those colored cables from the top of 32?)

Either way C+C much appreciated if anyone has the time to give it.



There's nothing wrong, except the lack of detail, shadows, etc.

The black outlines are a bit too harsh, but I think that's just WIP.
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 1:49pm
Originally posted by CuriousBeefJerky

May I reserve tile 96?


You can get it if you still want it.

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Quote Krugelix Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 2:35pm
Originally posted by jalonso

@Krugelix. I feel a little bad about crits with your tile now.
You pixel well and your update is terrific but I think it lost its dynamics with the 'flares' gone and I hope it wasn't my doing :(

No worries, i'm learning and i'm happy about every help and critic i get.
I tried to keep the 'flares' but i couldnt make it look good. But i think the brain looks now more 2.5D-ish.

But - I'm also not very happy with the whole comcept of 'something-brainish'...
Because of that i changed the tile completly. I think it fits better the collaboration.
What do you guys think?

@jalonso, can you please add a few pixels on your tile for the bold guy?

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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 2:56pm
Originally posted by Krugelix

jalonso, can you please add a few pixels on your tile for the bold guy?

Of course. I'll even add a snake on my tile.
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Quote Krugelix Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 3:03pm
Thanks a lot :)
and that are caterpillars :D
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Quote CuriousBeefJerky Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 3:08pm
Thanks, I'll take it
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Quote CuriousBeefJerky Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 5:07pm

So far, not bad.
Willing to take any C&C or recommendations on what else it needs.


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 6:08pm
Originally posted by CuriousBeefJerky



So far, not bad.Willing to take any C&C or recommendations on what else it needs.




Hehe, Samu.
I don't see the logic of the highlight purple?
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Quote CuriousBeefJerky Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2015 at 8:01pm
Seems about done, unless anyone has recommendations.



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Quote drain Replybullet Posted: 29 June 2015 at 12:22am
Going to have to withdraw from #67. I can't get anything to look right for Reo and Mirre's tile.

Could I switch to #31?

EDIT: edit to #10


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