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legendarySchoolboy
Seaman
Joined: 14 March 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5 |
![]() Topic: Help with Patapon AnimationPosted: 10 July 2017 at 2:38pm |
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I submitted an image that needs revision.
I changed the animation to be more interesting, but I still think it's too simple to be accepted.
I would love some recommendations. |
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eishiya
Commander
Joined: 04 August 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1109 |
![]() Posted: 10 July 2017 at 4:38pm |
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The problem isn't that it's too simple. Plenty of simple pieces get submitted.
The problem is probably that the background looks jagged and unpolished, and that your piece is pre-zoomed, and unevenly at that. Submit at 1x unless you have some reason not to - the site has a zoom feature, so people can zoom in if they want. As for the jagged lines, here's an edit that uses regular lines to show you what I mean: ![]() If I kept all the line segments the same width in each line, this gives them a cleaner look. I also tried to make them look like they're radiating from the character. I also made the character a little rounder because their circle shaped looked jagged/uneven to me, but I might've misinterpreted your intended design. Feel free to ignore that. |
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