Pixel Joint Forum: Matrix corner scene

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Rawgee
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Topic: Matrix corner scene - WIP
Posted: 03 March 2006 at 6:50am

This is my first post, i discover this place 3 days ago and this is a great community from what i saw. I would like ideas and comments please, this is for the Joint project. I was thinking of adding some matrix green letters to the background and maybe getting the ground a bit more dirty. Anyway, please comments so i can make it look better.

p.s: Please forgive my english i am a French Canadian and btw this is only my second creation.

Edited by Rawgee

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TheRat
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Posted: 03 March 2006 at 7:55am

Looks pretty good, but you need to work on the background... I think it doesn't matches the theme...

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Rawgee
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Posted: 03 March 2006 at 11:23am

That's it! Here is the final product! I hope it will be accpeted!

EDIT: Can someone tell me where i can submit this art for The Joint? Thanks

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Saiklor
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Posted: 03 March 2006 at 1:20pm

it'd be cool if he disappeared into the phone and reappeared again
fading in and out sort of
but it is cool how it is too.

www.semesteratsea.com

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Rawgee
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Posted: 03 March 2006 at 1:59pm

Indeed it would be awesome but that kind of animation is for flash and i dont master this software, i did this small animation with Adobe Imageready, its only a 3 frames animation. :S

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kwigbo
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Posted: 03 March 2006 at 7:47pm

That background animation adds a lot to it. I think it could do with a little more detail in the coat though and the phone. Like put all the seams in his coat. there is a seam at the top of each shoulder and there should be a seam around the collar to. There are buttons running down the front. And maybe add some folds in the lower part of the coat and on the sleeves. On the phone mabe just add some dirt and scratches to give it character. A little detail in this piece can go a long way to make it 100x cooler. There is a good refrence below of what i'm talking about. It's looking really good don't stop now.

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Revenant
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Posted: 20 March 2006 at 11:46pm

great work on the animation, it really dont seems to have only 3 frames, and the checkered floor fits perfectly

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Rawgee Seaman Joined: 02 March 2006 Location: Canada Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Topic: Matrix corner scene - WIP Posted: 03 March 2006 at 6:50am
	This is my first post, i discover this place 3 days ago and this is a great community from what i saw. I would like ideas and comments please, this is for the Joint project. I was thinking of adding some matrix green letters to the background and maybe getting the ground a bit more dirty. Anyway, please comments so i can make it look better. p.s: Please forgive my english i am a French Canadian and btw this is only my second creation. Edited by Rawgee
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TheRat Seaman Joined: 23 February 2006 Location: Colombia Online Status: Offline Posts: 29	Posted: 03 March 2006 at 7:55am
	Looks pretty good, but you need to work on the background... I think it doesn't matches the theme...
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Rawgee Seaman Joined: 02 March 2006 Location: Canada Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 03 March 2006 at 11:23am
	That's it! Here is the final product! I hope it will be accpeted! EDIT: Can someone tell me where i can submit this art for The Joint? Thanks Edited by Rawgee
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Saiklor Commander Joined: 16 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 230	Posted: 03 March 2006 at 1:20pm
	it'd be cool if he disappeared into the phone and reappeared again fading in and out sort of but it is cool how it is too.
	www.semesteratsea.com
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Rawgee Seaman Joined: 02 March 2006 Location: Canada Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 03 March 2006 at 1:59pm
	Indeed it would be awesome but that kind of animation is for flash and i dont master this software, i did this small animation with Adobe Imageready, its only a 3 frames animation. :S
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kwigbo Commander Joined: 18 February 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 346	Posted: 03 March 2006 at 7:47pm
	That background animation adds a lot to it. I think it could do with a little more detail in the coat though and the phone. Like put all the seams in his coat. there is a seam at the top of each shoulder and there should be a seam around the collar to. There are buttons running down the front. And maybe add some folds in the lower part of the coat and on the sleeves. On the phone mabe just add some dirt and scratches to give it character. A little detail in this piece can go a long way to make it 100x cooler. There is a good refrence below of what i'm talking about. It's looking really good don't stop now.

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Revenant Seaman Joined: 07 March 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 20 March 2006 at 11:46pm
	great work on the animation, it really dont seems to have only 3 frames, and the checkered floor fits perfectly
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