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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 26 March 2006 at 5:51pm
Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom

My meaning was to add an actual slide part so they don't fall off the ladder. XD

I like the table, and the tree is better, but maybe darken the highlight, or use less and dither for texture.



Ah lol. Well, I have seen many slides that are only two pipes, I used to play in them. What I forgot was to add the thing in the top where you put your hands for not to fall
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 28 March 2006 at 10:56pm
Ok, this is the final version. I think I took long enough with it. It's not pro, but I have learned tons of stuff

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I might have forgotten a couple of things (as always), but anyways, time to move to something else. If you still have critique I can give it a last minute fix. WEEEEEEEE
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 29 March 2006 at 11:05am
I like how you've added so much more. :]
There are only two problems I have with it...

The thng above the door, what is it? D:
Also, I hate how all the grass goes on the house.

I mean, I can understand random patches of grass, but all the way around?

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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 29 March 2006 at 11:07am
Oh also, how can the tree have so much light on it?
It's almost like you have like 4 light sources...

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Quote miau Replybullet Posted: 29 March 2006 at 11:19am
Your light source seems very inconsistent (looking at the shadows). And talking about shadows... kitty deserves one as well =(

All in all it's a lovely scene


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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 29 March 2006 at 12:11pm
Originally posted by Souly

I like how you've added so much more. :]
There are only two problems I have with it...

The thng above the door, what is it? D:
Also, I hate how all the grass goes on the house.

I mean, I can understand random patches of grass, but all the way around?


Hahaha, the thing above the door is a "lamp"
I thought the grass around the house looked good. At least it's easy to remove it weee.

And the lightsource, mmm, AAAAh! I still need a lot of practice with it.
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 29 March 2006 at 11:49pm
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 29 March 2006 at 11:58pm
Oh, and why are the shrubs so bright?

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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 30 March 2006 at 1:28am
Originally posted by Souly

Oh, and why are the shrubs so bright?


I'm in the process of fixing the whole thing and Ill lower the brightness in the plants. You see, today I saw my work in a different computer and it looked so different than in mine. My screen has a weird resolution and it shows everything in different tones, in this case very dark ones (even at max settings), no wonder everybody told me about the too light lighting .

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