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Ahhh, I don't really know why I'm even attempting this. xD

I'll probably add a scarf and perhaps a loose belt of some kind to make
her more interesting to look at. The edges are a little funky because I
want it to work on the dark background if I'm gonna try and enter it to
King of Spriters. :\ Any C&C is, of course, welcome.

EDIT: Here's the sprite with the scarf and the WIP portrait.

EDIT2: Okay, here are the (probably) final versions. Any last changes? : D

Oh, and the portrait is optimized for the dark background. ;D

Edited by Stitchy

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Stitchy Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 09 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 405	Topic: Guess what? Fighter sprite! Posted: 01 April 2006 at 6:21pm
	Ahhh, I don't really know why I'm even attempting this. xD I'll probably add a scarf and perhaps a loose belt of some kind to make her more interesting to look at. The edges are a little funky because I want it to work on the dark background if I'm gonna try and enter it to King of Spriters. :\ Any C&C is, of course, welcome. EDIT: Here's the sprite with the scarf and the WIP portrait. EDIT2: Okay, here are the (probably) final versions. Any last changes? : D Oh, and the portrait is optimized for the dark background. ;D Edited by Stitchy
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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 01 April 2006 at 6:40pm
	I AM IN AWE. Add that scarfy thing and make a portrait!

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..::Naso::.. Commander Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Posted: 01 April 2006 at 10:27pm
	Ditto what larwick said ;P its crazy how some people can make new stuff like noting ....you have talent... cant wait to see the scarfy thing, even maybe a animation!!! Edited by ..::Naso::..
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Blick Commander Joined: 19 November 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 389	Posted: 01 April 2006 at 10:57pm
	A loose sash around her waist would definitely make it a lot more interesting and break up the pattern on her body. A scarf might get too complicated though and get mixed up in the face area.

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hawken Midshipman Joined: 07 March 2024 Location: Japan Online Status: Offline Posts: 64	Posted: 02 April 2006 at 4:55am
	not sure about the hands and feet but the body and face are awsome
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EyeCraft Commander Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 425	Posted: 02 April 2006 at 5:05am
	I would probably only point out the feet as seeming perhaps out of perspective? Otherwise, it truly is excellent, cant wait for the scarf.
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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 02 April 2006 at 7:43am
	Oh yes, and now it isn't 4am i have just noticed the knees seem a tad bright. I mean, it doesn't look drastically bad, but seems a bit odd.

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Blick Commander Joined: 19 November 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 389	Posted: 02 April 2006 at 12:08pm
	I don't think the feet are out of perspective. I think she's just standing on the ball of her foot, rather than flat footed.

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CDI Commander Joined: 30 October 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 247	Posted: 02 April 2006 at 12:47pm
	that and if you knotice, her hands AND feet are ether gloved or look to be werewolfish
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Stitchy Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 09 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 405	Posted: 02 April 2006 at 12:55pm
	You got it, Blick. She is standing on the ball of her foot~ Thanks for all the suggestions, guys. :3 You think she still needs a sash or belt? /points up to added stuff EDIT: @CDI: Yeah, her hands and feet are permanently werewolf'd. And oversized. xD Edited by Stitchy
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CDI Commander Joined: 30 October 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 247	Posted: 02 April 2006 at 1:06pm
	I like her the way she is (like yur av) tis very very... hrm... not nice, better than nice :P but pretty sounds weird
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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 02 April 2006 at 2:07pm
	The knees are akwardly bright. Also, I agree with Blick that a loose sash would just mke it look better and less repetitive.
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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 02 April 2006 at 4:18pm
	It could make it too complicated however... I love the scarf you've added. Having it falling between her legs is wonderful! And CDI, i think pretty would work pretty well with this. Apart from the scary werewolf limbs... The portrait's coming along swimmingly! I love the texture and shading in her hair... can't wait to see this finished, could well be my favourite KOS piece.

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alkaline Commander Joined: 25 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 868	Posted: 02 April 2006 at 4:28pm
	I think taking away the scarf would make the portrait quite boring.
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Stitchy Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 09 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 405	Posted: 03 April 2006 at 8:57pm
	Added the final versions. x3 /points up
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Setzer Commander Joined: 18 December 2016 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 780	Posted: 03 April 2006 at 10:51pm
	the portrait is quite loverly :D soemthing seems abit odd about the face, but I can't quite say what. I love the hair, the scarf seems like it has very few colors compared to the rest of it though. as for the sprite, r0xxx0rz.

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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 04 April 2006 at 3:56am
	^_^ But yes, the scarf does seem a tad plain. I don't think there's much that can be done about that though, unless you add more shades.

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inkspot Commander Joined: 05 May 2005 Location: Estonia Online Status: Offline Posts: 452	Posted: 04 April 2006 at 8:57am
	The hand is a bit too big and as it is behind the face, face should be more centralized so I wouldn't notice the hand first. Add some more highlights to its face and to its rug over its neck.

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