Pixel Joint Forum: Wolverine Fighter Sprite

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Shark
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Topic: Wolverine Fighter Sprite
Posted: 13 April 2006 at 8:48am

something i made in about 2 maybe 2.5 hours when my internet was
down.

crit me1

Snark, we love yuu.

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Fhqwhgads
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 8:50am

His left arm is a little...weird :P

Its like bending back

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Andy Tran
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 2:04pm

It's a right arm Fhg. Yeah, it should be fixed. Something to shape up here is you might want to look at the arm's light source. Looks like the light source is below it.

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Fhqwhgads
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 2:10pm

Originally posted by Andy Tran

It's a right arm Fhg. Yeah, it should be fixed. Something to shape up here is you might want to look at the arm's light source. Looks like the light source is below it.

Left to me, right to him :P

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Aleiav
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 5:21pm

Both of his arms seem a bit weird. Reference pictures needed perhaps?

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Pixel_Outlaw
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 9:01pm

The arm attaches above the shoulder on your pic. It's popin' outta his neck like one of those frogs that was exposed to nuclear waste.

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fatal1ty
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 9:45pm

his feet look pretty big IMO.. arms are a little strange.
nice colouring though

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Blueberry_pie
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 10:41pm

I really like what you did with the pants... but like the rest said - still plenty of fixing to do.
Something I noticed: the second lightsource (blue-greenish) kind of makes it look like he's wearing a turtle shell on his back

It might just be me though.

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jalonso
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 10:44pm

Wolverine has four boobs

PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads

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RealQMark
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 11:17pm

My crits pretty much have to do with the right arm. It looks unatural. Mainly because the bend on the wrist and how high the arm seems into the shoulder. If you were to tilt it forward a bit and clean up the black line between the chest and the bicep, I think it should to the trick. Heads also seems just a tiny bit smaller than it should be.

I love the detail on the pants though. :P

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Shark
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Posted: 14 April 2006 at 2:57am

i think ill redraw the top half, and his left foot. altho i do like his left
arm. i think ill give him a more fighter stane with his right arm bent

Snark, we love yuu.

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PixelSnader
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Posted: 14 April 2006 at 6:53pm

his left foot looks like a right foot.

the head is too small and the hands appear to be turned outwards

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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Topic: Wolverine Fighter Sprite Posted: 13 April 2006 at 8:48am
	something i made in about 2 maybe 2.5 hours when my internet was down. crit me1
	Snark, we love yuu.
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Fhqwhgads Midshipman Joined: 08 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 83	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 8:50am
	His left arm is a little...weird :P Its like bending back
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Andy Tran Seaman Joined: 07 January 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 39	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 2:04pm
	It's a right arm Fhg. Yeah, it should be fixed. Something to shape up here is you might want to look at the arm's light source. Looks like the light source is below it.
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Fhqwhgads Midshipman Joined: 08 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 83	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 2:10pm
	*Originally posted by Andy Tran* It's a right arm Fhg. Yeah, it should be fixed. Something to shape up here is you might want to look at the arm's light source. Looks like the light source is below it. Left to me, right to him :P
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 5:21pm
	Both of his arms seem a bit weird. Reference pictures needed perhaps?
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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 9:01pm
	The arm attaches above the shoulder on your pic. It's popin' outta his neck like one of those frogs that was exposed to nuclear waste. Edited by Pixel_Outlaw

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fatal1ty Seaman Joined: 27 March 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 17	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 9:45pm
	his feet look pretty big IMO.. arms are a little strange. nice colouring though
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Blueberry_pie Rear Admiral Joined: 24 July 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2176	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 10:41pm
	I really like what you did with the pants... but like the rest said - still plenty of fixing to do. Something I noticed: the second lightsource (blue-greenish) kind of makes it look like he's wearing a turtle shell on his back It might just be me though.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 10:44pm
	Wolverine has four boobs
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
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RealQMark Seaman Joined: 13 April 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 11:17pm
	My crits pretty much have to do with the right arm. It looks unatural. Mainly because the bend on the wrist and how high the arm seems into the shoulder. If you were to tilt it forward a bit and clean up the black line between the chest and the bicep, I think it should to the trick. Heads also seems just a tiny bit smaller than it should be. I love the detail on the pants though. :P
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 14 April 2006 at 2:57am
	i think ill redraw the top half, and his left foot. altho i do like his left arm. i think ill give him a more fighter stane with his right arm bent
	Snark, we love yuu.
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 14 April 2006 at 6:53pm
	his left foot looks like a right foot. the head is too small and the hands appear to be turned outwards
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