Ok i made the rough draft of line art but which do you think i should use:

Normal(i know the feet are messed up)i think its more of what i was looking for.=-)

Spiky(i dunno)

 

 

 

i'd say the normal version, but with a bit of a harnass with small sdpikes on the shoulders and stuff. and maybe some small rips in the bottom, but think the ''spiky version'' is a bit overdone.

he's a tad skinny.. on purpose?

I would make a torn effect along with the spikes in the bottom , 

Howabout thickening up his upper arms (not outwards, inwards) I also think quite a few of the lines (such as in the area were his sleeve hangs down) could be neatened up, to make colouring it alot easier.

Well, thats all from me for today... lol.

hmm.. maybe try making the arms longer? He's so tall, but the arms (upper arms especially) seem too short.  I tried standing like that and my hands ended up on my belly button, so try positioning them where his belly button would be.

Doing good so far ;)

ya hes floating... ill work on the arms

UPDATE:

his robe doesnt fan out as much, i made the sleeeve sag the same amount and his arms are a little longer

if he is floating,the cloak wouldve been dragging on the floor so i guess it would be ripped

*flinches*
If he's floating the end of the cloak wouldn't look like that... in my eyes anyway. The tears are very random, and you need some folds of some sort. The cloth idea was to help you with it with reference, or you could just search google images or something.

UPDATE:

i tried fold but failed greatly. i think i like it not ripped though....

 

I think the hood doesn't really look 3D. st0ven makes an awesome hood look on one of his sprites. I'd suggest taking a look at that.

Why'd you remove the rips?

I honestly dont think the cloak would hang like that. Did you try the reference idea? If not, check this out:

http://www.larp.com/legioxx/paen1.jpg

The cloth hangs above the ground, so its still sort of what you're looking for, physics wise (although of course, you'd have to change the perspective).

i tried to do what Larwick said but i couldnt.

Howabout adding a bit of gathered cloth at the top of where his hands meet? If you're def sure about everything else, i think that would finish the lineart.

think the back of the hood should be less round?

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ya hes just randomly standing there... think its ready for color?

k

Update:

how does it look?

crap... i saved it as the wrong file... w8 a minute...

the cloth is still strange and 5 color for the eye? i would reuse some 

You're currently using far too many colours to little effect. I'd start off with 1 black for the lineart, 3 greys for the cloak (highlight, normal & shadow) and 2 or 3 red/oranges for the eyes. This will make it easier to start with, and you will be able to neaten it up later.

yes as in 8 colors or so for a goal