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Hawkevil
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    Posted: 22 May 2006 at 3:49pm

Here are my second and third tries at pixelart.

Please tell me what could be better about these and maybe I will get round to fixing them. At the moment I'm kind of just moving on to new pictures and trying out new things. Any criticism will be appreciated

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Quote 0xDB Replybullet Posted: 23 May 2006 at 4:59am
Not bad for a second and third piece... but:
The propulsion flame is coming seemingly out of nowhere from below the feet. The feet themselves look out of perspective and too much 2D and with the flame below them, their lighting is illogical.
The first figure looks crowded with details, so getting rid of some of the interior outlines could help. The arm or the end of the arm (hand?, sting?) is not really identifyable as anything and the small patch of detached pixels in front of it look like they were not intended to be there.

The second figure could benefit from some aa.
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