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moggy
Seaman ![]() Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13 |
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hi i am making this apartment for the joint of a man who has rather induldged himself.
I have put in a lot of food but i seem to have alot of empty floor still left and would appreciate any c+c or ideas about what to contain.
PS i have had to use another computer to make this post as whenever i try to log in on mine it says i have a cookie problem. If anyone could help me sort this out i would be very pleased thanks |
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Larwick
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Ooh, hum, you should have a huuuge stack of pizza boxes by the door.
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jalonso
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It's really funny and the details are good. It may just be the colors
of the floor and walls that make it seem empty. The walls in particular
could use some aging too, like he's too busy eating to clean up (door
too). If you need another detail, how about a trash bin filled with
wrappers, it would add some height and dimension if placed near the
corner.
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Revenant
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 March 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7 |
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About your cookie problem, try to change your security options in your browser options. Sometimes they keep the pages from creating cookies, that is nothing more then a small text file with a lil bit of information. About your work, it's really a nice idea, but what about a freezer? Maybe the room could be a kitchen ^^ |
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Saiklor
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yeah, or kitchen-esque.
I vote for still-life oil paintings of fruit and cheese and wine on the walls. and maybe some lurid wallpaper with dancing fruit on it or something? |
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Dra_chan
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His right arm looks a bit short, or maybe it's just me. The food looks great.
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PixelSnader
Commander ![]() ![]() Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194 |
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or you could pretend this guy is a bum and just put a sleeping bag in the big open part. problem solved.
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jalonso
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Originally posted by Saiklor ...still-life oil paintings of fruit and cheese and wine on the walls. and maybe some lurid wallpaper with dancing fruit on it... perfect ![]() |
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leel
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you've got the food, but where are all the wrappers and stuff from yesterday? it is much too neat for a fat guy with a room full of food. And yeah, I love Saiklor's idea |
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Saiklor
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how about a maid cleaning up the mess?
he can be a really f**king rich awful glutton. |
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jalonso
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How many post does it take Saiklor to go from genius to retard?
5 |
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0xDB
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 15 March 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 209 |
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A big pile of junk would be nice with flies swirling around it. I also
like the idea with the oil paintings and the sleeping bag.
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Larwick
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Sleeping bag sounds good snader. Or could just have a quilt with more junk piled up inside it... lol.
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moggy
Seaman ![]() Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13 |
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thanks for all the suggestions guys- i agree it does look too clean and i think ill add some changes to the walls aswell. while i do this i mite think of putting some slight animation in e.g. flies or summin wat do u think thanks again for the ideas
btw i fixed my cookie problem lol summin to do with the temporary folder being full |
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Saiklor
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 230 |
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Jalonso I'm not sure what you're getting at.
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jalonso
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No offense meant Saikor. I loved your picture/wallpaper idea but hated
the maid one. It was an attempt at saying that with humor, guess I
failed
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Shark
Commander ![]() ![]() a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
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yeah maid would suck, i think just make him an average joe homer
simpson esque character. |
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Snark, we love yuu.
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moggy
Seaman ![]() Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13 |
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Hi sorry i havent updated but ive been realy quite busy lol. As for the pic i have added some pics on teh wall and im working on a pile of rubbish as i speak lol. Heres what the pic looks like at the moment so keep up the great C+C guys. EDIT: Well it turned out the bin wasnt working to well but then i was randomly drawing and i came up witht he idea that the guy( or his wife lol) was too fat he broke the floor!. Then voila- here was the outcome- Obviuously there is still abit of space to fill and im still looking for ideas lol but what do u think of this idea? Edited by moggy |
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Shark
Commander ![]() ![]() a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
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HIS right arm is way too short.
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Snark, we love yuu.
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moggy
Seaman ![]() Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13 |
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Oh yer i noticed that aswell now * trys to fix* thnx
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Souly
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He ATE his ARM... |
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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WOW its looking great. The hole in the floorboards is genious.
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Skull
Commander ![]() ![]() PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521 |
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Originally posted by jalonso WOW its looking great. The hole in the floorboards is genious. He.. had a room mate ![]() |
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moggy
Seaman ![]() Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13 |
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UPDATE: I think ive sorted his arm but feel free to correct me there. Its nearly getting on i just need to finish off filling the space. Still looking for C+C. Oh and btw i thought about playing around with shadows how does the one behind the man look? |
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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Yes, you need shadows everywhere. I would now consider getting rid of
all the black outlining on the room itself (don't forget where the
floor meets the walls. Make the door a darker color so the pizza box in
the mail slot stands out too.
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halfDemon
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 04 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 318 |
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It looks great, but I'd change the color of the door. Make it "pop" a bit more, without the black outlines.
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Every pixel counts, even the dead ones.
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moggy
Seaman ![]() Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13 |
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UPDATE: Thanks for the advice- I followed most of it and heres what i came up with. I tryed abit of shadowing but i dunno how it turned out. ONce ive filled in the gaps i think i will be ready to upload it. Thanks and feel free to offer any more advice. |
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Shark
Commander ![]() ![]() a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
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its probably gallery-fit already... but please do continue to work this
XD |
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Snark, we love yuu.
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Ensellitis
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I think you should animate those eyes in the hole, make them blink or something
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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halfDemon
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 04 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 318 |
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Originally posted by Ensellitis
I think you should animate those eyes in the hole, make them blink or something That would definetly meakes this even funnier. You have 666 posts... creepy. |
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Every pixel counts, even the dead ones.
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moggy
Seaman ![]() Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13 |
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Well I've animated the eyes....adequately i spose lol and i think i am going to submit this as I haven't really got any inspiration for things to add lol. thanks for all that critted and heres the final version- EDIT: wait there is something dodgy with the edges lol when i have fixed that i will upload it. Edited by moggy |
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Skull
Commander ![]() ![]() PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521 |
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Very funny animation. Looks great, I would definatly suggest submiting now.. nothing more you can add..
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