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   hi 
i am making this apartment for the joint of a man who has rather induldged himself.

I have put in a lot of food but i seem to have alot of empty floor still left and would appreciate any c+c or ideas about what to contain.

PS i have had to use another computer to make this post as whenever i try to log in on mine it says i have a cookie problem. If anyone could help me sort this out i would be very pleased thanks

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moggy Seaman Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Topic: Fat Guy apartment Posted: 19 March 2006 at 8:38am
	hi i am making this apartment for the joint of a man who has rather induldged himself. I have put in a lot of food but i seem to have alot of empty floor still left and would appreciate any c+c or ideas about what to contain. PS i have had to use another computer to make this post as whenever i try to log in on mine it says i have a cookie problem. If anyone could help me sort this out i would be very pleased thanks
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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 19 March 2006 at 9:37am
	Ooh, hum, you should have a huuuge stack of pizza boxes by the door.

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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 19 March 2006 at 10:12am
	It's really funny and the details are good. It may just be the colors of the floor and walls that make it seem empty. The walls in particular could use some aging too, like he's too busy eating to clean up (door too). If you need another detail, how about a trash bin filled with wrappers, it would add some height and dimension if placed near the corner.
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Revenant Seaman Joined: 07 March 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 19 March 2006 at 11:55am
	About your cookie problem, try to change your security options in your browser options. Sometimes they keep the pages from creating cookies, that is nothing more then a small text file with a lil bit of information. About your work, it's really a nice idea, but what about a freezer? Maybe the room could be a kitchen ^^
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Saiklor Commander Joined: 16 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 230	Posted: 19 March 2006 at 1:01pm
	yeah, or kitchen-esque. I vote for still-life oil paintings of fruit and cheese and wine on the walls. and maybe some lurid wallpaper with dancing fruit on it or something?
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Dra_chan Commander Joined: 20 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 628	Posted: 19 March 2006 at 2:39pm
	His right arm looks a bit short, or maybe it's just me. The food looks great.
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 19 March 2006 at 3:15pm
	or you could pretend this guy is a bum and just put a sleeping bag in the big open part. problem solved.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 19 March 2006 at 4:30pm
	*Originally posted by Saiklor* ...still-life oil paintings of fruit and cheese and wine on the walls. and maybe some lurid wallpaper with dancing fruit on it... perfect
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 19 March 2006 at 7:48pm
	you've got the food, but where are all the wrappers and stuff from yesterday? it is much too neat for a fat guy with a room full of food. And yeah, I love Saiklor's idea
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Saiklor Commander Joined: 16 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 230	Posted: 19 March 2006 at 9:40pm
	how about a maid cleaning up the mess? he can be a really f**king rich awful glutton.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 19 March 2006 at 10:32pm
	How many post does it take Saiklor to go from genius to retard? 5
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0xDB Commander Joined: 15 March 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 209	Posted: 20 March 2006 at 2:39am
	A big pile of junk would be nice with flies swirling around it. I also like the idea with the oil paintings and the sleeping bag.
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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 20 March 2006 at 4:31am
	Sleeping bag sounds good snader. Or could just have a quilt with more junk piled up inside it... lol.

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moggy Seaman Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 20 March 2006 at 8:48am
	thanks for all the suggestions guys- i agree it does look too clean and i think ill add some changes to the walls aswell. while i do this i mite think of putting some slight animation in e.g. flies or summin wat do u think thanks again for the ideas btw i fixed my cookie problem lol summin to do with the temporary folder being full
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Saiklor Commander Joined: 16 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 230	Posted: 20 March 2006 at 12:18pm
	Jalonso I'm not sure what you're getting at.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 20 March 2006 at 12:52pm
	No offense meant Saikor. I loved your picture/wallpaper idea but hated the maid one. It was an attempt at saying that with humor, guess I failed
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 20 March 2006 at 1:52pm
	yeah maid would suck, i think just make him an average joe homer simpson esque character.
	Snark, we love yuu.
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moggy Seaman Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 07 June 2006 at 11:02am
	Hi sorry i havent updated but ive been realy quite busy lol. As for the pic i have added some pics on teh wall and im working on a pile of rubbish as i speak lol. Heres what the pic looks like at the moment so keep up the great C+C guys. EDIT: Well it turned out the bin wasnt working to well but then i was randomly drawing and i came up witht he idea that the guy( or his wife lol) was too fat he broke the floor!. Then voila- here was the outcome- Obviuously there is still abit of space to fill and im still looking for ideas lol but what do u think of this idea? Edited by moggy
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 07 June 2006 at 11:03am
	HIS right arm is way too short.
	Snark, we love yuu.
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moggy Seaman Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 07 June 2006 at 11:34am
	Oh yer i noticed that aswell now * trys to fix* thnx
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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 07 June 2006 at 1:11pm
	He ATE his ARM...
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 07 June 2006 at 11:00pm
	WOW its looking great. The hole in the floorboards is genious.
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 08 June 2006 at 8:54am
	*Originally posted by jalonso* WOW its looking great. The hole in the floorboards is genious. He.. had a room mate

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moggy Seaman Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 12 June 2006 at 10:07am
	UPDATE: I think ive sorted his arm but feel free to correct me there. Its nearly getting on i just need to finish off filling the space. Still looking for C+C. Oh and btw i thought about playing around with shadows how does the one behind the man look?
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 12 June 2006 at 5:57pm
	Yes, you need shadows everywhere. I would now consider getting rid of all the black outlining on the room itself (don't forget where the floor meets the walls. Make the door a darker color so the pizza box in the mail slot stands out too.
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halfDemon Commander Joined: 04 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 318	Posted: 14 June 2006 at 12:27pm
	It looks great, but I'd change the color of the door. Make it "pop" a bit more, without the black outlines.
	Every pixel counts, even the dead ones.
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moggy Seaman Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 15 June 2006 at 8:46am
	UPDATE: Thanks for the advice- I followed most of it and heres what i came up with. I tryed abit of shadowing but i dunno how it turned out. ONce ive filled in the gaps i think i will be ready to upload it. Thanks and feel free to offer any more advice.
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 15 June 2006 at 9:10am
	its probably gallery-fit already... but please do continue to work this XD
	Snark, we love yuu.
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Ensellitis Commander Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099	Posted: 15 June 2006 at 12:14pm
	I think you should animate those eyes in the hole, make them blink or something
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halfDemon Commander Joined: 04 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 318	Posted: 15 June 2006 at 8:56pm
	*Originally posted by Ensellitis* I think you should animate those eyes in the hole, make them blink or something That would definetly meakes this even funnier. You have 666 posts... creepy.
	Every pixel counts, even the dead ones.
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moggy Seaman Joined: 22 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 08 July 2006 at 7:34am
	Well I've animated the eyes....adequately i spose lol and i think i am going to submit this as I haven't really got any inspiration for things to add lol. thanks for all that critted and heres the final version- EDIT: wait there is something dodgy with the edges lol when i have fixed that i will upload it. Edited by moggy
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 08 July 2006 at 7:43am
	Very funny animation. Looks great, I would definatly suggest submiting now.. nothing more you can add..

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