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Pieface
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Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
   Topic: Another Day's WorkPosted: 29 July 2006 at 4:34am |
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hey i just started a randomn pixel and ended up making this. Anyway to improve it would help By The Way its meant to be one of Santa's Elves :P
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Skull
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Posted: 29 July 2006 at 5:36am |
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The hat looks way mishapen, and there's not enough buldge for pockets to suit the hands. Nice colours though.
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Blueberry_pie
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Posted: 29 July 2006 at 10:05am |
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You've also got some pillow shading going on... I'd suggest you pick an actual light source and stick to that.
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Lawrence
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Joined: 30 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 481 |
Posted: 29 July 2006 at 10:53am |
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It looks like that hat has a powerful erection. Apart from what skull and blueberry pie said, that's all I can say.
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Pieface
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Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
Posted: 29 July 2006 at 11:17am |
Ive done a bit of what ou guys said
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fil_razorback
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Posted: 29 July 2006 at 12:17pm |
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I'd say that first of all (?), you need more contrast on the hat
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Pieface
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Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
Posted: 29 July 2006 at 4:26pm |
Is that a bit better?
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fil_razorback
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Posted: 30 July 2006 at 3:17am |
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A bit ^^
Also, you forgot to shade the socks. I'm not very good at giving C&C so I don't say much. Just bumping your thread in fact. |
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Pieface
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Posted: 30 July 2006 at 7:05am |
There done the socks
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Pieface
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Posted: 30 July 2006 at 2:24pm |
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So shall i submit it now?
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MurrMan
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Posted: 30 July 2006 at 3:44pm |
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get rid of the black line join at the sholder
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I have plenty of emotions; It is Sleep that i lack
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Pieface
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Posted: 30 July 2006 at 5:13pm |
Now?
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Monkey 'o Doom
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Posted: 31 July 2006 at 5:47am |
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You need to fix the anatomy REALLY badly.
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RPG is numberwang. |
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Skull
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Posted: 31 July 2006 at 7:42am |
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There are no legs!
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Pieface
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Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
Posted: 31 July 2006 at 10:50am |
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HES AN ELF, ONE OF SANTA'S ELVES.
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Aleiav
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Posted: 31 July 2006 at 10:51am |
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elves still have human like anatomy and proportion i.e. legs.
Edited by Aleiav - 31 July 2006 at 10:51am |
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