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Craddik
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Quote Craddik Replybullet Topic: Shio The Genin
    Posted: 12 September 2006 at 6:00pm

Original Lines by teej (yes i have permission to use them), i'm using it for shading practice.

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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 12 September 2006 at 6:36pm
I wouldn't dither the hair - it's just not the right texture for it.
 
That's all i have right now, there's not much shading there to cc..
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Quote halfDemon Replybullet Posted: 12 September 2006 at 7:55pm
I wouldn't dither the hair or the metal bands.
Every pixel counts, even the dead ones.
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Quote Craddik Replybullet Posted: 13 September 2006 at 4:23am
yeah, i'll fix those things when i post the next update.

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Quote Draco9898 Replybullet Posted: 13 September 2006 at 6:10am
The bands covering up his hair and the hair still sticking out looks really weird.

I do however like all the angles and the anatomy
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Quote Craddik Replybullet Posted: 13 September 2006 at 12:27pm
not my lines
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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 13 September 2006 at 2:08pm
Craddik, even if they arn't your lines, there's no harm in correcting them, or taking in people's advice so you can correct them by colouring. For instance, you could create the image of depth on the fringe behind the headbands so that it's more obvious that hair is coming from the other side of his head, rather than sticking out of his forehead.

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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 13 September 2006 at 2:14pm
And make sure to give credit where credit is due.

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Quote halfDemon Replybullet Posted: 13 September 2006 at 3:47pm
He has given credit to teej.
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 13 September 2006 at 3:52pm
I realized that just now. :'[

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