Pixel Joint Forum: [w.i.p.] ...space prison? [ANIMATED!!]

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   another piece.... maybe my second entry for the joint ;)

how thread subject says, this is a sort of space prison...
later, I'll animate the piece... I think I'll do lasers flashing or appear/disappear 
how about? what can I change/better?

Edited by kiwidesign

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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Topic: [w.i.p.] ...space prison? [ANIMATED!!] Posted: 27 June 2005 at 3:03pm
	another piece.... maybe my second entry for the joint ;) how thread subject says, this is a sort of space prison... later, I'll animate the piece... I think I'll do lasers flashing or appear/disappear how about? what can I change/better? Edited by kiwidesign
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DrunkyDuck Midshipman Joined: 25 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46	Posted: 27 June 2005 at 3:36pm
	Another awesome room. Don't forget to add some laser fence generators in the lowest room corner. Can't wait to see it done.
	Reaching out to embrace the random. Reaching out to embrace whatever may come. I embrace my desire to swing on the spiral of our divinity and still be a human.
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 27 June 2005 at 4:06pm
	*Originally posted by DrunkyDuck* Don't forget to add some laser fence generators in the lowest room corner. uhm... if you are thinking about the laser fence on the glass cube... it is the reflex of the bigger one *Originally posted by DrunkyDuck* Can't wait to see it done. Aw ...here is 1.00am and tomorrow I have to wake up very early... I'll finish it tomorrow night ...other suggestions? Edited by kiwidesign
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 27 June 2005 at 7:54pm
	yap... I finally understand what didn't work!! the laser fence-corner... has no solid corner! here three different solutions: 1. 2. 3. I think 3rd is the best one... what about you?
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DrunkyDuck Midshipman Joined: 25 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46	Posted: 28 June 2005 at 4:34am
	I'd go with nuber 1, but I'm sure some people would like 2 or 3 better, so choose what you think is the best.
	Reaching out to embrace the random. Reaching out to embrace whatever may come. I embrace my desire to swing on the spiral of our divinity and still be a human.
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 28 June 2005 at 8:13am
	I'd go with 1 or 2 personally.
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 28 June 2005 at 3:07pm
	thks, I think I'll continue with this... something to fix before animate? add something to the scene?
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 28 June 2005 at 3:33pm
	I think the laser field could use some highlights so they don't look so flat. Also, why have the dude inside a glass casing when the room itself is protected by a laser field? I think you should also add some furnishing of some sort > a cot, a toilet and sink. Take a look online at some prisons (both fictional and factual) and see what they have to offer for ideas.
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 28 June 2005 at 5:48pm
	okay, with order: was in my plans to get the fence more really, but is the last thing i wanna do, after fixed bigger problems about furnitures I thinked the cell like a sort of "maximum security isolation cell" ... and in all the movies I seen (luckily I never seen a real one) isolation cell were empty rooms ;) the glass cube is the "first cage", the real cell.... laser fence is a sort of security obstacle :)
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kankki Commander Joined: 26 March 2005 Location: Finland Online Status: Offline Posts: 195	Posted: 29 June 2005 at 3:30am
	This looks nice!
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 29 June 2005 at 9:48am
	solved the corner problem.... uhmm... what can I add to the left part?
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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Posted: 29 June 2005 at 11:45pm
	Think for another inscription for "ISO.CELL #1" now look very thin and high ... ... and agree with pixelblink for furnishing :) ================================ :) GDGB :)
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 30 June 2005 at 9:45am
	added the loo and the alarm (if I'll decide to put it in final image, I think it will flash...), very little bit textured the walls and changed the inscription.... yap, also a bit lightened the fence Edited by kiwidesign
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 30 June 2005 at 9:49am
	Make sure your animation doesn't break past the top of the walls or it will not show up.
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 30 June 2005 at 9:49am
	mmmmh... okay about the rest?
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 02 July 2005 at 5:00am
	i like this one!! maybe you could get the lasers to animate a bit to show that they are moving, like a spark now and again, or a pulsating wave through the lasers,
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 02 July 2005 at 8:44am
	yep, I'm doing it in my free time
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 1:04pm
	finally animated!!! finished this night, I'm really satisfied by the piece ...I know it shouldn't break past the top of the walls, but if I submit it like now it's a problem, or simply the outside part will not show up? C&C are welcome!!
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 3:44pm
	It will show up fine, but the ceiling of the apartment will be covered up... just look at some of the existing submissions to see what i mean. Check/uncheck the "show exterior walls".
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 5:13pm
	I know, I also had some tries to check how it will show, masking the room with the joint corridor walls.... btw clicking on it, it will be shown entirely right? what about animation work? let's go, destroy me boys!!
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 5:19pm
	(sedge, you mean something like this, right?)
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 05 July 2005 at 8:53pm
	I think this is joint-ready dude. I like that you actually put the time and effort into getting feedback, updating, getting more feedback, updating again, getting even more feedback, and then producing the animation. There will always be things in everybody's work that I will think I would do differently. But that wouldn't make it your own original work. Kudos to you for a piece well done
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 05 July 2005 at 10:49pm
	*Originally posted by kiwidesign* (sedge, you mean something like this, right?) That's exactly right. Edit: Btw, thank you for taking the time to demonstrate that. Edited by sedgemonkey
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 06 July 2005 at 1:59am
	big thanks to everybody!! I did a few pixel art in the past, but never with this motivation.... pixel joint is a very nice project, and I hope to continue finding time for this! now I'm doing 100x100 preview for the submission.... ..and excuse me for my always be-in-hurry
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 06 July 2005 at 4:47am
	submitted!! if possible I'd like to see it into position 6
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jujucece Midshipman Joined: 06 July 2005 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 07 July 2005 at 1:19am
	It's a very cool pixel art... And the animation is nice too ! Congratulations !
	Jujucece
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 07 July 2005 at 3:26am
	thanks ^^
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 07 July 2005 at 3:33am
	*Originally posted by kiwidesign* submitted!! if possible I'd like to see it into position 6 ouch.... not possible?
	"She doesn't quite chop his head off. She makes a Pez dispenser out of him"
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