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Lawrence
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You can make the chest plates look rounded simply in the way you shade them. Also the foot look too stiff, it should be bent as it touches the ground.
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Pixel_Outlaw
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Well I must say it's getting better bit by bit.
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chess
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249 |
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@ pieface: the grandpa is a bit drunken as i said and.. drunken mans got red noses u know?
![]() ![]() Lawrence ure post helps me allot and @ Pixeloutlaw: thx its good to hear something like that^^ what to do with its trousers? are they wrinkled good?i hope i made this pair of trousers not tooo bad.. ![]() i think my work grows. what else is to edit on him? or is the pic perfect maybe? ![]() so thx plz post further ![]() ATM: Edited by chess - 25 October 2006 at 9:11am |
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Monkey 'o Doom
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The piece doesn't seem to have a consistent lightsource in some places. Try to shade the entire thing to show light hitting the top of the forms, like you do on the chest plates and shoe. The forehead and legs, as well as his left arm (our right), could really use to be shaded to that lightsource, but try to get the whole piece to show it. Keep up the good response to the crits you're getting.
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Pieface
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
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tbh I like him alot more wthout the red nose, also im liking the shading on the trousers but MoD is right about the light source
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chess
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249 |
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yes, the thing with the lightsource is right.. don`t look at the weapons! i copyed the left one and paste it mirrored on the other side... it`s provisional.
![]() the light source will be the left upper corner. some ideas which color the light should have? make examples plz i am not shure of that ![]() a white light maybe...will see i dont want to ruin the pic with a wrong light color.. so can u plz help me? ![]() |
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Monkey 'o Doom
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Right now I think a white light source would be best, then as you gain skill start to expand in later pieces.
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chess
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249 |
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so.. i started it and the weapons are finished i guess!!
![]() now i am doing the trousers and then its nearly finished. is the lightsource good? whats with the shading? plz give c&c Edited by chess - 27 October 2006 at 8:12am |
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leel
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I dont think anyone has said this yet, but it'd be best not to dither the chest plates - if you want the metallic look, make the shading smooth and sleek like you did on the guns. The dithering gives it a rough texture and that looks kinda odd on armour. |
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Pixel_Outlaw
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I think the mirroerd guns should change with the angle he's holding them/
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chess
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249 |
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u must look the guns arent mirrored tehyre right now;)
ok i will try the thing wit hthe chest wait a few seconds ...waiting ...waiting... here it is.. better so? |
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chess
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249 |
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is everybody content with it now?
i like the grandpa much! if there are any crits or so plz post it ![]() |
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PixelSnader
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why are you highlighting the face with gray? the arms still are too stiff, and the legs guns and hands too mirrored
chest looks sweet though
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chess
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249 |
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grey is smoother than white and that i want^^
is the arm better so? Edited by chess - 28 October 2006 at 9:28am |
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chess
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249 |
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is everybody content with it now?:)
i like that one alot and it was mutch work. are here any c&c´s? |
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Souly
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The left arm looks too stiff.
You need to add some shading to the bicep so it appears not as straight. |
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chess
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249 |
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like this?
i find that hard! it is not easy to do this well for me ![]() Edited by chess - 30 October 2006 at 10:42am |
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PixelSnader
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souly ment the guys left arm, the right one in the image, the grey one
he does look more relaxt now yes
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chess
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249 |
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so u like his arms now?
i think the grey arm is smooth? Edited by chess - 30 October 2006 at 11:29am |
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Pieface
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146 |
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I reckon the fingers should be changed, there just pilow shaded atm, also he has no nails
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chess
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249 |
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apart from this... what do u think? i am editing but it will take its time.. i`ve got no time today
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chess
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249 |
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hello?^^ ok its ready but... post plz^^
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Ensellitis
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enough with the double posting. post ONCE, if you have something extra to say, and no one has said anything, click the edit button (
![]() if you cant learn that, i will start locking every thread you make that you double post in |
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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Larwick
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Chess, you said you'd work on it but you havent posted up an update. It's pretty pointless to bump unless you have something new to show so we can continue critting. People will ignore the thread if you've not done anything since they last posted.
You've come a fair way so far. Just post an update.
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chess
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249 |
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yes sorry here it is and its ready thx all for the c and c! ;):) |
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PixelSnader
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i'd finish up the edges a bit (spare grey pixels around the arm, jaggie knee, stuff near the hair etc.) and call it done i think
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