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Varock Shade
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Topic: W.I.P MOZ Graffiti Can #2 - Finished
Posted: 20 January 2007 at 6:36am

FInished Version...

Edit 4 - More "Living" Eyes?+Background colours edited (To me, this could be the version ill be sending for approval)...

Edit 3 - Colour/Contrast Edit+Silver Edges on the mouth

Edit 2 - Continued Shading+Backside of mouth added+Bg Added

Edit 1 - Continued shading+Edited lower Rim

This pixel is because i had an idea for another cartoony graffiti can...

But this time i decided to go for a different way of shading, and also this wont be for a sticker...

I want to know what you think of it, and how the shading looks (i know it looks grainy, but i want it kinda grainy...

Ref picture of the can:

http://www.graffitishop.cz/data/big/m_black_terror.jpg
(Im not gonna put the letters in i think, ill decide that later, i wanna keep it simple)...

Edited by Varock Shade - 27 January 2007 at 6:28am

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PixelSnader
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Posted: 20 January 2007 at 5:31pm

lower rim is screwed up

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leel
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Posted: 20 January 2007 at 5:40pm

the shape looks a little awkward. I like your other one which was like ( much more than > now. If that makes sense. Maybe if you make the thingie at the top point in the same direction as the top part of the can it'll look better

and yeah, like snader said, why is there a random dip in the lower rip? last can I saw it was even.

Edited by leel - 20 January 2007 at 5:41pm

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Varock Shade
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Posted: 26 January 2007 at 4:58am

After some time, edit 1...

I edited the lower rim, im not gonna edit the cap, cause i think it looks good this way (else the upper part of the can will look too long and hanging too much forward)...

Also, i continued the shading, which i like so far. The only problem that ims till facing is that my right mouse button is still not working and i still didnt buy a new one (so edit 2 will take some time)...

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Posted: 26 January 2007 at 6:48am

back part of the mouth seems ripped, dont be lazy draw it

I know! Leafs shouldn't make shadow...

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Varock Shade
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Posted: 26 January 2007 at 7:32am

you mean there seems to be no right side of the mouth...? yeah, youre right about that, but on my drawing for this pixel it neither had it, and i think it will look better witout, but i can make an edit of it anyway...

Edit 2 - I continued the shading, added a backside of the mouth and made a simple Bg... Probly the Bg is gonna get some edits, but this idea popped up in my mind...

Edited by Varock Shade - 26 January 2007 at 10:37am

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Posted: 26 January 2007 at 12:18pm

what is he supposed to be doing? he seems to be doubling over in pain.

And add some life to the eyes

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Posted: 26 January 2007 at 12:22pm

The texture looks like brushed aluminum......

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Posted: 26 January 2007 at 1:26pm

Looks to me as if he's coughing really heavily.

You could use to make the can's cross-section (the 'lips') the same silver as the other unpainted part and maybe give the darkish part a more black and less gunmetal color; cans are generally not painted dark grey like that.

RPG is numberwang.

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Varock Shade
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Posted: 27 January 2007 at 12:26am

Originally posted by leel

what is he supposed to be doing? he seems to be doubling over in pain.

And add some life to the eyes

About the first thing... I think it doesn't look like he's having pain... anyway, youre right about the eyes, They look bad at the moment...

Originally posted by Pixel_Outlaw

The texture looks like brushed aluminum......

Is that be a positive or a negative thing to you...?

Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom

Looks to me as if he's coughing really heavily.

I am gonna change colours... The silver has a nice contrast i think, it only needs a little edit... The red certainly needs more contrast, probably the greys too, and if I edit the grey, i probably also need to edit the cyan-like colour...

And about the lips, ill make an edit of that and see what it looks like... And coughing really heavily... I dont think it looks like that but well, Bg is still at an early stage...

Edit 3:

On the left the silver edges at the mouth, on the right side the colour/contrast edit.

Finished version...

Edited by Varock Shade - 27 January 2007 at 6:11am

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Varock Shade Commander Joined: 29 March 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 303	Topic: W.I.P MOZ Graffiti Can #2 - Finished Posted: 20 January 2007 at 6:36am
	FInished Version... Edit 4 - More "Living" Eyes?+Background colours edited (To me, this could be the version ill be sending for approval)... Edit 3 - Colour/Contrast Edit+Silver Edges on the mouth Edit 2 - Continued Shading+Backside of mouth added+Bg Added Edit 1 - Continued shading+Edited lower Rim This pixel is because i had an idea for another cartoony graffiti can... But this time i decided to go for a different way of shading, and also this wont be for a sticker... I want to know what you think of it, and how the shading looks (i know it looks grainy, but i want it kinda grainy... Ref picture of the can: http://www.graffitishop.cz/data/big/m_black_terror.jpg (Im not gonna put the letters in i think, ill decide that later, i wanna keep it simple)... Edited by Varock Shade - 27 January 2007 at 6:28am
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 08 January 2026 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 20 January 2007 at 5:31pm
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 20 January 2007 at 5:40pm
	the shape looks a little awkward. I like your other one which was like ( much more than > now. If that makes sense. Maybe if you make the thingie at the top point in the same direction as the top part of the can it'll look better and yeah, like snader said, why is there a random dip in the lower rip? last can I saw it was even. Edited by leel - 20 January 2007 at 5:41pm
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Varock Shade Commander Joined: 29 March 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 303	Posted: 26 January 2007 at 4:58am
	After some time, edit 1... I edited the lower rim, im not gonna edit the cap, cause i think it looks good this way (else the upper part of the can will look too long and hanging too much forward)... Also, i continued the shading, which i like so far. The only problem that ims till facing is that my right mouse button is still not working and i still didnt buy a new one (so edit 2 will take some time)...
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Bifur Commander Joined: 15 April 2006 Location: Brazil Online Status: Offline Posts: 194	Posted: 26 January 2007 at 6:48am
	back part of the mouth seems ripped, dont be lazy draw it
	I know! Leafs shouldn't make shadow...
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Varock Shade Commander Joined: 29 March 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 303	Posted: 26 January 2007 at 7:32am
	you mean there seems to be no right side of the mouth...? yeah, youre right about that, but on my drawing for this pixel it neither had it, and i think it will look better witout, but i can make an edit of it anyway... Edit 2 - I continued the shading, added a backside of the mouth and made a simple Bg... Probly the Bg is gonna get some edits, but this idea popped up in my mind... Edited by Varock Shade - 26 January 2007 at 10:37am
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 26 January 2007 at 12:18pm
	what is he supposed to be doing? he seems to be doubling over in pain. And add some life to the eyes
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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 26 January 2007 at 12:22pm
	The texture looks like brushed aluminum......

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Monkey 'o Doom Commander Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994	Posted: 26 January 2007 at 1:26pm
	Looks to me as if he's coughing really heavily. You could use to make the can's cross-section (the 'lips') the same silver as the other unpainted part and maybe give the darkish part a more black and less gunmetal color; cans are generally not painted dark grey like that.
	RPG is numberwang.
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Varock Shade Commander Joined: 29 March 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 303	Posted: 27 January 2007 at 12:26am
	*Originally posted by leel* what is he supposed to be doing? he seems to be doubling over in pain. And add some life to the eyes About the first thing... I think it doesn't look like he's having pain... anyway, youre right about the eyes, They look bad at the moment... *Originally posted by Pixel_Outlaw* The texture looks like brushed aluminum...... Is that be a positive or a negative thing to you...? *Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom* Looks to me as if he's coughing really heavily. You could use to make the can's cross-section (the 'lips') the same silver as the other unpainted part and maybe give the darkish part a more black and less gunmetal color; cans are generally not painted dark grey like that. I am gonna change colours... The silver has a nice contrast i think, it only needs a little edit... The red certainly needs more contrast, probably the greys too, and if I edit the grey, i probably also need to edit the cyan-like colour... And about the lips, ill make an edit of that and see what it looks like... And coughing really heavily... I dont think it looks like that but well, Bg is still at an early stage... Edit 3: On the left the silver edges at the mouth, on the right side the colour/contrast edit. Finished version... Edited by Varock Shade - 27 January 2007 at 6:11am
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