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jujucece
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Topic: Splinter Cell right balcony
Posted: 11 July 2005 at 6:22am

Hi,

I see that Right balcony are very rare in The Joint, so let's add mine...

It's a basic balcony based from Splinter Cell Video Game, but I hope you'll find it nice...

You can put it Level 1 Position 13; but you can also use it at level 3 Position 15 near the room with Bush, it can be fun...

See ya !

Jujucece

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Blueberry_pie
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Posted: 11 July 2005 at 7:20am

It's nice, but it seems the only things you changed from the template are Mr. Fisher and that rope. I think you should add some more things to it...

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jujucece
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Posted: 11 July 2005 at 7:30am

You're right, but I haven't any ideas on what adding more...

Perhaps a dead "soldier" on the left of the window ? I'll try to make it !

Jujucece

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jujucece
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Posted: 11 July 2005 at 8:16am

Adding a dead man at the left...

But you will only be able to see this man, in The Joint, with hiding exterior walls...

C or C...

Thanks in advance...

Jujucece

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Dejital
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Posted: 11 July 2005 at 8:32am

It looks good, but I think you should add dynamic lighting. Splinter Cell is all about the lighting, after all.

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pixelblink
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Posted: 11 July 2005 at 10:30am

the people are very small aren't they? The rope is very jagged too.. are they climbing down barbed wire? I would suggest adding alot more to this as I would not approve this on the joint

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kiwidesign
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Posted: 11 July 2005 at 1:47pm

uhm... you can broke the window, dirty the walls with camo paint, add more "action"....

keep it up!

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Kirra
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Posted: 11 July 2005 at 3:55pm

The people are very small compared to that sliding door. They look like kid size.. I would add dynamic lighting to it too as Dejital said. Actually, if i were you i would make it look like evening and then make the splinter cell guy have those green goggle thingys and since it would be dark on the balcony the goggles could glow. And I would also make the rope actually look like rope because right now it looks like string.. Maybe add some blood on the ground

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jujucece
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Posted: 11 July 2005 at 11:38pm

OK, thanks everybody for your posts...

For the size of the character, I made it as tall as the Spice Girls and as tall as others people in The Joint, but in fact you're right, they're a little bit smaller than others...

I try to enhance all this...

But for the background of the balcony, I don't want to change everything, because of the integration in The Joint...
If I change totally the balcony (with army design for example...), I think it will not integrate very well in The Joint. A balcony is not really like an appartement.

What do you think ?

Thanks !

Jujucece

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jujucece
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Posted: 12 July 2005 at 3:02am

Here's a new version :

Some comments have been taken in account, but for the light, I don't want to change more, because of the integration in The Joint...

C&C welcomed !

Jujucece

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Ensellitis
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Posted: 12 July 2005 at 5:18am

The dead guys legs are little... Odd... And you should darken his hair a bit, I thought he was bald for a minute there. All in all, it's looking good.

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sedgemonkey
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Posted: 12 July 2005 at 8:24am

This looks much better, but Ensellitis is right... the legs look a bit wonky. The security cam and sign help a lot.

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jujucece
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Posted: 13 July 2005 at 5:49am

My last version, with modification for the legs, (but it's a bit hard to design well) and a little animation for the Shooted Security Cam...

Jujucece

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kiwidesign
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Posted: 13 July 2005 at 7:51am

some bullet holes on the walls and/or in the window?

some more blood?

the shadow behind the glass is great!

"She doesn't quite chop his head off. She makes a Pez dispenser out of him"

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Monstara
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Posted: 13 July 2005 at 8:41am

Hmm that's quite nice. I liked the game
I don't think you need much more, except maybe move a bit away from the template, heh.
If you could do tiny grass pots on the edge...

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kiwidesign
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Posted: 13 July 2005 at 9:20am

yeah, it's quite okay now, but it seem a bit empty, again....

"She doesn't quite chop his head off. She makes a Pez dispenser out of him"

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Garage Inc.
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Posted: 13 July 2005 at 10:18am

You should have some kind of ceiling light. Have the rest of the room/balcony, dark. and have a light on shinging down and you can only see like, the body of the dead guy on the left, then in the dark, you have the shadow/silouhet (how ever you spell it) of the guy with the gun. Really, you jsut need to do more, it's all so boring right now.

For every second spent wondering if you can do something, you could spend 2 seconds doing it.

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TakeOut
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Posted: 28 July 2005 at 6:09pm

I think it's fine as is. I'd just add some junk here and there on the floor. Maybe like supplies such as weaponry. That'd be a nice addition. Just a few more things and it should feel complete.

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sedgemonkey
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Posted: 25 August 2005 at 9:23am

Just a reminder to submit your piece if you are done. No sense letting it wallow in this thread.

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jujucece Midshipman Joined: 06 July 2005 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Topic: Splinter Cell right balcony Posted: 11 July 2005 at 6:22am
	Hi, I see that Right balcony are very rare in The Joint, so let's add mine... It's a basic balcony based from Splinter Cell Video Game, but I hope you'll find it nice... You can put it Level 1 Position 13; but you can also use it at level 3 Position 15 near the room with Bush, it can be fun... See ya !
	Jujucece
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Blueberry_pie Rear Admiral Joined: 24 July 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2176	Posted: 11 July 2005 at 7:20am
	It's nice, but it seems the only things you changed from the template are Mr. Fisher and that rope. I think you should add some more things to it...
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jujucece Midshipman Joined: 06 July 2005 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 11 July 2005 at 7:30am
	You're right, but I haven't any ideas on what adding more... Perhaps a dead "soldier" on the left of the window ? I'll try to make it !
	Jujucece
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jujucece Midshipman Joined: 06 July 2005 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 11 July 2005 at 8:16am
	Adding a dead man at the left... But you will only be able to see this man, in The Joint, with hiding exterior walls... C or C... Thanks in advance...
	Jujucece
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Dejital Midshipman Joined: 03 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 75	Posted: 11 July 2005 at 8:32am
	It looks good, but I think you should add dynamic lighting. Splinter Cell is all about the lighting, after all.
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 11 July 2005 at 10:30am
	the people are very small aren't they? The rope is very jagged too.. are they climbing down barbed wire? I would suggest adding alot more to this as I would not approve this on the joint
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 11 July 2005 at 1:47pm
	uhm... you can broke the window, dirty the walls with camo paint, add more "action".... keep it up!
	"She doesn't quite chop his head off. She makes a Pez dispenser out of him"
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Kirra Midshipman Joined: 12 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 41	Posted: 11 July 2005 at 3:55pm
	The people are very small compared to that sliding door. They look like kid size.. I would add dynamic lighting to it too as Dejital said. Actually, if i were you i would make it look like evening and then make the splinter cell guy have those green goggle thingys and since it would be dark on the balcony the goggles could glow. And I would also make the rope actually look like rope because right now it looks like string.. Maybe add some blood on the ground
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jujucece Midshipman Joined: 06 July 2005 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 11 July 2005 at 11:38pm
	OK, thanks everybody for your posts... For the size of the character, I made it as tall as the Spice Girls and as tall as others people in The Joint, but in fact you're right, they're a little bit smaller than others... I try to enhance all this... But for the background of the balcony, I don't want to change everything, because of the integration in The Joint... If I change totally the balcony (with army design for example...), I think it will not integrate very well in The Joint. A balcony is not really like an appartement. What do you think ? Thanks !
	Jujucece
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jujucece Midshipman Joined: 06 July 2005 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 12 July 2005 at 3:02am
	Here's a new version : Some comments have been taken in account, but for the light, I don't want to change more, because of the integration in The Joint... C&C welcomed !
	Jujucece
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Ensellitis Commander Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099	Posted: 12 July 2005 at 5:18am
	The dead guys legs are little... Odd... And you should darken his hair a bit, I thought he was bald for a minute there. All in all, it's looking good.
	ಠ_ಠ There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 12 July 2005 at 8:24am
	This looks much better, but Ensellitis is right... the legs look a bit wonky. The security cam and sign help a lot.
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jujucece Midshipman Joined: 06 July 2005 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 13 July 2005 at 5:49am
	My last version, with modification for the legs, (but it's a bit hard to design well) and a little animation for the Shooted Security Cam...
	Jujucece
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 13 July 2005 at 7:51am
	some bullet holes on the walls and/or in the window? some more blood? the shadow behind the glass is great!
	"She doesn't quite chop his head off. She makes a Pez dispenser out of him"
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Monstara Commander Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 179	Posted: 13 July 2005 at 8:41am
	Hmm that's quite nice. I liked the game I don't think you need much more, except maybe move a bit away from the template, heh. If you could do tiny grass pots on the edge...
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kiwidesign Midshipman Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 13 July 2005 at 9:20am
	yeah, it's quite okay now, but it seem a bit empty, again....
	"She doesn't quite chop his head off. She makes a Pez dispenser out of him"
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Garage Inc. Commander Joined: 20 October 2021 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 318	Posted: 13 July 2005 at 10:18am
	You should have some kind of ceiling light. Have the rest of the room/balcony, dark. and have a light on shinging down and you can only see like, the body of the dead guy on the left, then in the dark, you have the shadow/silouhet (how ever you spell it) of the guy with the gun. Really, you jsut need to do more, it's all so boring right now.
	For every second spent wondering if you can do something, you could spend 2 seconds doing it.
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TakeOut Commander Joined: 27 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 147	Posted: 28 July 2005 at 6:09pm
	I think it's fine as is. I'd just add some junk here and there on the floor. Maybe like supplies such as weaponry. That'd be a nice addition. Just a few more things and it should feel complete.
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 25 August 2005 at 9:23am
	Just a reminder to submit your piece if you are done. No sense letting it wallow in this thread.
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