Pixel Joint Forum: mobile snow... why not

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   Hey pixeljointians, me here signing in.

Recently.. being sometime today, i started on the fourth of my mobile games and have decided to put my work on this game up for crits.. as i dont think my last graphics were anywhere as good as they could be.

anyways in the game you are a kid who goes around dodgeing snowballs throwing snowballs diveing through caves leaping across ice burgs and all to get home in time for tea :D... because why not

here is what i have made so far,

the reason i have posted the loading screen is because it should give you some idea of the style i want, it shows you the screen size i am makeing the game for, it has the main player sprite in it.

Mainly i want crits on the main player sprite but PLEASE feel free to crit anything.

UPDATE... i have updated the main charicter (thanks souly :) ) also there is the start to the running animation

UPDATE...thanks MOD, cool beans.. any better? i shaded the running now and moved arms like you sugested... also i made him bob a bit and bought the back arm faward more.

crits?

p.s, cool beans

Edited by Artisan - 09 February 2007 at 9:39am

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Artisan Commander Joined: 29 August 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 219	Topic: mobile snow... why not Posted: 08 February 2007 at 11:05am
	Hey pixeljointians, me here signing in. Recently.. being sometime today, i started on the fourth of my mobile games and have decided to put my work on this game up for crits.. as i dont think my last graphics were anywhere as good as they could be. anyways in the game you are a kid who goes around dodgeing snowballs throwing snowballs diveing through caves leaping across ice burgs and all to get home in time for tea :D... because why not here is what i have made so far, the reason i have posted the loading screen is because it should give you some idea of the style i want, it shows you the screen size i am makeing the game for, it has the main player sprite in it. Mainly i want crits on the main player sprite but PLEASE feel free to crit anything. UPDATE... i have updated the main charicter (thanks souly :) ) also there is the start to the running animation UPDATE...thanks MOD, cool beans.. any better? i shaded the running now and moved arms like you sugested... also i made him bob a bit and bought the back arm faward more. crits? p.s, cool beans Edited by Artisan - 09 February 2007 at 9:39am
	I like shiny things, i do indeed.
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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 08 February 2007 at 11:44am
	Alright did an edit on your character.
	I am the jesus of PJ.
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Artisan Commander Joined: 29 August 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 219	Posted: 08 February 2007 at 2:02pm
	UPDATE... i have updated the main charicter (thanks souly :) ) also there is the start to the running animation Edited by Artisan - 08 February 2007 at 3:01pm
	I like shiny things, i do indeed.
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Monkey 'o Doom Commander Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994	Posted: 08 February 2007 at 5:05pm
	The arm in the back looks like it's attached too far back. Try making it show in more frames and more in the frames it's in. I don't have any other crits at this point, good luck with the rest of the game!
	RPG is numberwang.
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Artisan Commander Joined: 29 August 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 219	Posted: 11 February 2007 at 12:59pm
	<OLD> thanks MOD, cool beans.. any better? i shaded the running now and moved arms like you sugested... also i made him bob a bit and bought the back arm faward more. crits? ANOTHER EDIT!!! your thoughts? </OLD> Anyways superupdateeritus... i beleive the kind fellas over at pixelation have helped me much improve that run cycle.... but im a-in need of help inspiration or differnt ideas to my tiles.... i HATE what i have so far so all help on them is more than apreciated! thanks. me
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