Pixel Joint Forum: Pizza Box

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Hello guys!
Im not doing much flat pixels, I like to work isometric, cos its easyer :p
However I made this pizza box, and it wasnt accepted becouse it does not meet the quality standards..

Can anyone help me and say what to inprove?
Thnx,
Lollige

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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Topic: Pizza Box Posted: 10 February 2007 at 2:00am
	Hello guys! Im not doing much flat pixels, I like to work isometric, cos its easyer :p However I made this pizza box, and it wasnt accepted becouse it does not meet the quality standards.. Can anyone help me and say what to inprove? Thnx, Lollige
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 21 May 2026 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 10 February 2007 at 5:35am
	i think the pizza itself looks a bit messy, and the perspective is off (it should be twice as wide as high as well) maybe some decal on the box?
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Setzer Commander Joined: 18 December 2016 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 780	Posted: 10 February 2007 at 11:13am
	the pizza seems really flat and lacks form, compared to the harsh black outlines, its very hard to tell there is a round pizza in there. You might want to darken the edges some.

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onyx Seaman Suspended Joined: 14 March 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24	Posted: 18 May 2007 at 9:41pm
	the pizza is not very visible, maybe you need to make it bigger to add detail
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 18 May 2007 at 10:28pm
	*Originally posted by onyx* the pizza is not very visible, maybe you need to make it bigger to add detail y did u bump it? However its accepted yet, reduced the colors...
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