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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Topic: WIP ISO House
    Posted: 10 June 2007 at 12:18pm
Well i started this isometric house earlier, it first started as a hut from a tutorial i followed which i expanded on and turned it into a house which i was rather pleased with but i feel it needs more work so i bring it to you guys for help and inspiration
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okay so there is my house so far, pretty plain imo, the right hand wall definately plain i know  i was thinking for that wall perhaps a balcony? but i also thought due my lack of knowledge and skills that would be rather hard
 
so if anyone would like to give me tips on how to do this or what to add next i would be grateful and get right on it
 
thanks for reading.
 
EDIT: tried to add ''texture'' as saint minor suggested :p


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 12:27pm
Welcome to the forum!

@all, I asked TinyDot to bring this here for WIPping.

As we were PMing here is the most basic of iso help I may offer you which may be of help.



I know this shows a robot but the idea is generally the same for anything iso.
If you are using MSPaint then I really don't know how to do it. I always suggest that people new to iso pixels make the unit on its own, say the balcony you speak off. Then join it to your item.
I could make an edit to show you if you really need it but my n00btorial there explains it all step by step in a simple way.

You have left some stray white pixels here and there (change to darker theme if you need to see them).

Notice your house is at #4 as it is.


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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 12:33pm
yeah i noticed th stray pixels only after i posted, not meant to be there ^_^
thanks for the ''n00btorial''
 
and i will see what i can do :D
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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 1:10pm
well theres the balcony, could be better i know but this is a WIP
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 1:19pm
See how easy that was :)
Now take all that to #5. Start thinking of #6 while you're at it. The flagpole should move out away from the wall a pixel or two. The windows and doors can be indented in and out as you like. Also at this point consider the height of a person compared to the door. Then place them by the window and noticed is way too high for them. Take that person and move it around to see whats 'off' and fix those things. Some overhanging roof tiles over windows and doors will break the boxes a lot. Understand?
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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 1:22pm
i understand all you said at first but then about the roof tiles breaking lines or whatever?
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 1:27pm
Should I show you with an edit? You'll have to forego any idea that's mine tho.
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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 1:29pm
urm yes please
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 1:31pm
k, go check out the gallery or the links or the tutorial section for a bit
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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 1:47pm
going in the shower be back in around 20 minutes
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 2:09pm

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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 2:26pm
ah i understand what you mean about roof tiles over windows now! :p and might i add that would be one amazing house if it was coloured
 
thanks again
 
EDIT: i also see what you mean about the person and the scale but imo he might be a tad too tall, most humans arent the same size as their doors, more often smaller but i see what you mean, thanks


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 2:28pm
You may color it, elborate on it and make it your own.
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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 2:31pm

well, i will try not to plaigerise your peice in the adaptation of my own house! i will get to work asap but for now i think i must sleep as i have school tommorow

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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2007 at 2:33pm
Take your time, pixelart is all about patience. Have a good night TinyOne
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Quote Pixitis Replybullet Posted: 11 June 2007 at 10:15am
You could add a brick pattern to the house to make it, well, more housy. You never see a house fully made out of plaster. Maybe some broken bits, like a hole in the wall or a smashed window?
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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 11 June 2007 at 10:23am
woah woah woah one step at a time there Pixitis :p you know im not amazing so i'll keep it at a low for now, i realise it's not very ''housy'' at the moment but its a WIP so i will improve it over time of course

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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 11 June 2007 at 11:01am
Brick pattern not needed.. it can be a non brick house too... 

Ok in your new edit, you have added some details, a human.. and thats what jalonso did too.. he added details.. but thats not why he made the edit, he allways adds details but it was about the scale.. and now you have drawn a human, every floor should be around the size of the human (a bit larger offcourse)
Take a look at jalonso's edit again, if you dont know what I mean.. is version is alot smaller
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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 11 June 2007 at 11:12am
No i see what you mean his walls are smaller yes, i will work on this of course, i was only using my person at this time for scaling the windows and doors for the moment, i will work on the rest soon
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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 11 June 2007 at 11:32am
Originally posted by jalonso





jesus, i swear i have seen that more than my own damn hands!  lol
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross.
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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 12 June 2007 at 7:25am
Got sent home from school today  because i couldn't see a thing! f**king hayfever
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Quote Saint Minor Replybullet Posted: 12 June 2007 at 9:26am
It's coming along well. I'd like to see you add textures to the roof and possibly the walls as well. But definatly the roof..if it turns out bad you still have where your at now to fall back on.
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Quote Pixitis Replybullet Posted: 13 June 2007 at 10:38am
Yes! Good! But i think only the garage door should have that texture. Maybe a brick pattern? Heaven knows!
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 13 June 2007 at 10:51am
I fixed your texture a bit.. look what I have done :)

Oh and 1 tip, try to remove all your black lines!
Read this
http://pixelfreak.com/en/tutorial3.html
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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 13 June 2007 at 10:59am
thanks lollige, but where you removed the black line there is now a large gap so the whole pattern would have to move up a pixel lol. also you've added a lighter line down the corner i see, thanks :p
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Quote Pixitis Replybullet Posted: 13 June 2007 at 11:03am
ATinyDot? If Jalonso says so, may i use his edit. I'm asking permission from you because he edited to show you what he meant. i will also ask him.
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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 13 June 2007 at 11:10am
urm doesn't bother me i spose although im not sure he will give you full permission, maybe some edit may be needed by yourself to his edit? who knows :S
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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 14 June 2007 at 2:50pm
i havent made any advances on my house in a few days and wont for another few i have been and i still am busy
 
 
also lollige that is the tutorial i used to start this house ^_^
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Quote ATinyDot Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2007 at 9:27am
Right well im not as busy any more and i want to continue with this, just wondering where to go from here though..... any thoughts guys?
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2007 at 11:36am
yes, try to not double post.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2007 at 2:06pm
I think the roof needs to go over the house a bit.
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Quote Kfuchoin Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2007 at 2:15pm
go on from jalonsos edit..., or try to make soemthing similar..
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