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   This mockup piece is based on great Marco Vale's tutorial.

I used the v18 of the 16 colors palette from Arne.

I've not finished it yet (since it's a WIP   ), but any C&C would be welcome.

Edited by Mindiell - 04 July 2007 at 3:47pm

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Mindiell Commander Joined: 05 October 2015 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 52	Topic: First mockup Posted: 04 July 2007 at 4:55am
	This mockup piece is based on great Marco Vale's tutorial. I used the v18 of the 16 colors palette from Arne. I've not finished it yet (since it's a WIP ), but any C&C would be welcome. Edited by Mindiell - 04 July 2007 at 3:47pm
	Mindiell French n00b
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Omegavolt Commander Joined: 03 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 227	Posted: 04 July 2007 at 11:18am
	Some better definition between grass and sky would be good. Try lowering the saturation of the grass and/or darkening up the lower portion of the sky.
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Mindiell Commander Joined: 05 October 2015 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 52	Posted: 04 July 2007 at 3:24pm
	In fact, I want to use the strict palette to give Arne some mockups with it. I'll try to use another blue, and the sky is really not finished. Further, I'll try to break the vertical line which, I think, is not good.
	Mindiell French n00b
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Mindiell Commander Joined: 05 October 2015 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 52	Posted: 05 July 2007 at 4:41am
	Omegavolt, I thought about your crit and tried to exchange sky color with the other blue. I think this is better now. Fixed the bad vertical line which broke my tile. And finally, I've tried something on the sky, but I'm not happy with it...
	Mindiell French n00b
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 05 July 2007 at 8:41am
	try putting in more dither patters to make a smooth transition... I'd made you an edit but I lost it at the end (Grr!) anyway, just start the dither lower to the ground and then use a lot of patterns to smooth it out edit: oh well, dither is fun, so I did it again: I like the middle one the most Edited by leel - 05 July 2007 at 9:02am
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Lawrence Commander Joined: 30 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 481	Posted: 05 July 2007 at 12:15pm
	Remember, a clear sky is always darkest near the top, because there is less atmosphere in a space perpendicular to the earth than there is across the surface.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 05 July 2007 at 7:49pm
	Listen to Lawrence he invented lighting.
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 05 July 2007 at 11:13pm
	right, of course. I was just talking about the dithers >_> Of course.
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Mindiell Commander Joined: 05 October 2015 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 52	Posted: 06 July 2007 at 5:50am
	I put the sky back without dithering, I'll work on this later. I tried some clouds to...
	Mindiell French n00b
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