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Sansui
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Joined: 17 July 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1 |
![]() Topic: WIP: wolfPosted: 26 July 2007 at 12:00pm |
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I started here.
![]() ![]() Most people said it looked to much like a dog. so i moved to this point. which is where I am. ![]() ![]() I'm also planing on animating it and am very curious as to what y'all have to say about it as is, and for advice on doing so. Crits and comments in any shape and form are largely appreciated! |
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Kfuchoin
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Joined: 11 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 740 |
![]() Posted: 26 July 2007 at 12:25pm |
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it looks pretty good just shade the legs... a bit...
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may the pixels be with you..
~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903 |
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jokun
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Joined: 27 April 2006 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 11 |
![]() Posted: 26 July 2007 at 12:40pm |
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Yeah, I like your newer one better. The pink-ish color of the lower body/legs is a little weird. Some shading there would be good too, since the top has much more detail.
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M.E.
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Joined: 26 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 430 |
![]() Posted: 26 July 2007 at 11:40pm |
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Hello Sansui,
Welcome to PJ. Actually you are doing pretty well. Dogs and wolves are looking pretty close especially if you look at a german sheppards. However when looking at pictures and movies they tend to have thick fur around the head. You could also try to make the lower leg a bit thinner. When you move the body, please remember that everything works together. In your edit you just changed the legs. But the back moves with the movement as well as the shoulders. Oh and how much I want to see you animate it! I am planning a 4-legged animal move myself (lion) and I struggle with it immensely. From what I have read and seen a four legged animal is kind of two people walking behind eachother. If you are new to animation I would first suggest that you do a walk of a human (feet only if you want to focus on animals). Looking really forward of your updates because like I said before you are already on a great start! Best regards from M.E. You could also try to thinner the legs. |
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