Pixel Joint Forum: WIP: Fate

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Here's a WIP which i've been working on which sees the inhabitant of a planet meeting its end through various means.

I would love to have some advice on what I can do to improve its quality and possibly even put it on par with some of the better pieces out in the gallery.

Edited by morfius - 14 August 2007 at 3:59am

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morfius Seaman Joined: 09 April 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8	Topic: WIP: Fate Posted: 14 August 2007 at 3:47am
	Here's a WIP which i've been working on which sees the inhabitant of a planet meeting its end through various means. I would love to have some advice on what I can do to improve its quality and possibly even put it on par with some of the better pieces out in the gallery. Edited by morfius - 14 August 2007 at 3:59am
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Kingy Seaman Joined: 24 July 2007 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 15	Posted: 19 August 2007 at 7:04am
	Looks good but the meteor needs some transparency with the background to distinguish the flame from the actual meteor. and as i said before smooth the edges of the guy into the background so they are not as sudden a jump.
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Kimau Seaman Joined: 17 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 19 August 2007 at 7:30am
	Just look at how the rock is separate from the trail. Maybe reuse some colours used on the rocket. Possibly move the flame trail up on the Rocket by a pixel of two. Edited by Kimau - 19 August 2007 at 7:30am
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