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crukis
Seaman 
Joined: 30 August 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11 |
   Topic: Computermouse avatarPosted: 29 September 2007 at 2:50am |
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Hey!
I'm making a computermouse for my avatar. I'm wondering what you think about it and what I should change. I'm may make a lasermouse with animation later  . Please com & crit. |
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Rosenborg 2-0 Valencia!
Steffen Iversen! |
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Hapiel
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Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266 |
Posted: 29 September 2007 at 4:16am |
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Pillowshading
 Make the light come from the left, the right, bottom, top, but NOT the middle! |
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FrostPumpkin
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Joined: 18 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 188 |
Posted: 29 September 2007 at 4:21am |
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looks like a mouse sculpted in a piece of rock :/
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crukis
Seaman
Joined: 30 August 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11 |
Posted: 29 September 2007 at 4:22am |
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k, tnx, bye
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Rosenborg 2-0 Valencia!
Steffen Iversen! |
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A.B.
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Joined: 16 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 79 |
Posted: 29 September 2007 at 6:31am |
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Really good.
Didn't like the perspective, though. :/
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MashPotato
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Joined: 05 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 237 |
Posted: 29 September 2007 at 7:04am |
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I think it's a little over anti-aliased, makes it seem a bit fuzzy. I'm not great at aa, but I did a quick edit to give you an idea what I mean (I only changed the aa on the right side)
 Remember, you don't need to add aa everywhere, only to smooth out jaggies  Also, I got rid of the black outlines as it made the parts of the mouse "bulge", and edited the lower curve of the mouse button and side a bit. I didn't touch the shading, but I would suggest keeping the shadows regular and in keeping with the curves of the mouse. Hope this helps, keep at it! |
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Metaru
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Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305 |
Posted: 29 September 2007 at 9:33am |
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i would use less dithering as well.
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