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Koch
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   Topic: My Argiope WIPPosted: 19 October 2007 at 11:36am |
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This was rejected, please tell me how I should improve this. Thanks.
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BlackDragon
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Posted: 19 October 2007 at 11:40am |
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How about more symmetry? Some of his legs looks shorter than the other. And his body looks like it was stepped on.
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"A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie
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Koch
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Posted: 19 October 2007 at 1:03pm |
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In this species the legs aren't the same size anyway, how can I make the abdomen look more bulbous?
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BlackDragon
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Posted: 19 October 2007 at 1:20pm |
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Even so, the legs still look a little odd. Use higher contrast and shading to make the body more "bolbous". Try to match the pattern ont the spider, also. Yours looks sketchy.
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Koch
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Joined: 16 March 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 17 |
Posted: 19 October 2007 at 1:24pm |
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I didn't use this pic as a reference, each spider has it's slightly unique alteration of pattern. I'll try that to make it appear more bulbous... yes, that is a word, it doesn't need quotation marks. Thanks.
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