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C0DE0NE
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Quote C0DE0NE Replybullet Topic: Face Animation
    Posted: 19 October 2007 at 8:27pm
This pixel was something simple I made out of boredom.

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Self Criticism:
Quarter-Profiles look odd?
♦ Body doesn't move as arm rises [Strictly Animation]
♦ Blue Line not used appropriately

I'm not an expert or anything, but I think these criticisms are valid; then again everything may be acceptable, but I doubt that . I'm also looking for how I can put more detail into the face if the pixel is too simple.


Edited by C0DE0NE - 20 October 2007 at 5:09pm
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 20 October 2007 at 9:13am

well, removed tree frames, chenged the frame delay values of the animation, and fixed the eyebrow in the quarter profiles and after the rise of the sunglasses.
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Quote Hatch Replybullet Posted: 20 October 2007 at 12:03pm
The arm and hand really need attention.
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Quote C0DE0NE Replybullet Posted: 20 October 2007 at 5:08pm
Metaru: The change you made in the animation makes a lot more sense than the way I had it. Can't believe I couldn't see it in my head x.x

Hatch: I put some work into the arm and hand in the update.

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Touched up the arm and hand as well as added movement to his shoulders and chain when arm is being raised. His hands have also been placed more on the rims of lens because picking up glasses from the frame would make the glasses tilt
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 21 October 2007 at 6:17pm
you have exagerated with the movement of the chain. also, rounding a bit the neck of your shirt would make it look better.
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 22 October 2007 at 2:13pm
shading gets removed in some frames.. (
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