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   AGH! I actually got the damn vegtable warrior looking alright, and I notice I have an extra colour! Damn!

Anyways, I have three versions here ( The first one doesn't have the correct amount of colours sadly.

I'm absolutely atrocious at making legs, sadly.

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Any and all help is appreciated!   

Oh, and incase you can't tell, it's a tomato fighter!

:Quckie edit:

Changed the sword and some shading a bit. Minor edit.

Edited by Jimmy Bojangles - 05 November 2007 at 9:48am

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Jimmy Bojangles Midshipman Joined: 22 October 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 62	Topic: Challenge WIP Posted: 05 November 2007 at 9:00am
	AGH! I actually got the damn vegtable warrior looking alright, and I notice I have an extra colour! Damn! Anyways, I have three versions here ( The first one doesn't have the correct amount of colours sadly. I'm absolutely atrocious at making legs, sadly. 1: 2: 3: Any and all help is appreciated! Oh, and incase you can't tell, it's a tomato fighter! :Quckie edit: Changed the sword and some shading a bit. Minor edit. Edited by Jimmy Bojangles - 05 November 2007 at 9:48am
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 05 November 2007 at 9:57am
	Lower the saturation of the red.. and enlarge canvas so you can show the full sword..
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Jimmy Bojangles Midshipman Joined: 22 October 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 62	Posted: 05 November 2007 at 10:27am
	That is the full sword, and sadly, the saturation has to stay, because I don't really want it to be a rotten tomato. :ANIMATION EDIT!: And with trans! Edited by Jimmy Bojangles - 05 November 2007 at 11:07am
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BlackDragon Commander Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 729	Posted: 05 November 2007 at 2:11pm
	Well, it will look better. Also add more detail and more CONTRAST. Make sure you have good lines before you go ahead and animate. The way he holds his arm away from his body looks unnatural. Also he is holding his sword just above his shoulder when normally you would rest upon it. Edited by BlackDragon - 05 November 2007 at 2:12pm
	"A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie
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Jimmy Bojangles Midshipman Joined: 22 October 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 62	Posted: 05 November 2007 at 2:33pm
	Yeah, I see what you mean, I should concentrate on getting my skills up before I start animating. Ah well, I'll use what you gave me, and try to improve. Quick edit: Is this any better? Or did I over AA? :\ Edited by Jimmy Bojangles - 05 November 2007 at 2:48pm
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BlackDragon Commander Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 729	Posted: 05 November 2007 at 3:22pm
	Its so much better now! 1 thing- don't AA on 45 degree angles.
	"A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie
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Squirrelsquid Commander Joined: 18 July 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 259	Posted: 05 November 2007 at 4:08pm
	AAing a 45 degree angle is not a good idea. it makes the line thick and blurry. some yellow-greensih shade would look good as a highlight on the leaf, IMO. Edited by Squirrelsquid - 05 November 2007 at 4:07pm
	vote for squirrels crates!
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