Pixel Joint Forum: Avvy

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D-Puff
Seaman
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Topic: Avvy
Posted: 13 November 2007 at 5:42pm

Heres my avvy i made, ive put this aside for a while, but finally decided to finish it. I was wondered if there was anything i could revise before i submitted it. any suggestions?

Edited by D-Puff - 13 November 2007 at 5:42pm

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greenraven
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Posted: 13 November 2007 at 5:48pm

Get rid of the white background. The left ear seems to be missing the... how should I put this... the ear hole. Hope you can understand what I mean. The dark area.

Otherwise good job.

"pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso

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D-Puff
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Posted: 13 November 2007 at 5:52pm

Originally posted by greenraven

Get rid of the white background. The left ear seems to be missing the... how should I put this... the ear hole. Hope you can understand what I mean. The dark area.

Otherwise good job.

well, as for the background, of course i'll get rid of that, but the left ear is facing the opposite way, so of course you cant see the hole

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Noburo
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Posted: 14 November 2007 at 9:31am

Green raven is right, at the way you have him standing you would be able to see part of it. Also, keep to one light source.

I made a quick edit to show you what I mean.

[Light source is coming from upper left]

Edit - Forgot to mention this, but the dither pattern only appearing in the hair doesn't really fit.

Edited by Noburo - 14 November 2007 at 9:31am

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D-Puff
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Posted: 16 November 2007 at 4:20am

all right, back to the forum. this is the one i posted in the gallery-

i'll work on another ASAP, but i'm on my way to school, and i'll work on it get back

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D-Puff Seaman Joined: 06 December 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Topic: Avvy Posted: 13 November 2007 at 5:42pm
	Heres my avvy i made, ive put this aside for a while, but finally decided to finish it. I was wondered if there was anything i could revise before i submitted it. any suggestions? Edited by D-Puff - 13 November 2007 at 5:42pm
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greenraven Commander Joined: 08 September 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2598	Posted: 13 November 2007 at 5:48pm
	Get rid of the white background. The left ear seems to be missing the... how should I put this... the ear hole. Hope you can understand what I mean. The dark area. Otherwise good job.
	"pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso
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D-Puff Seaman Joined: 06 December 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 13 November 2007 at 5:52pm
	*Originally posted by greenraven* Get rid of the white background. The left ear seems to be missing the... how should I put this... the ear hole. Hope you can understand what I mean. The dark area. Otherwise good job. well, as for the background, of course i'll get rid of that, but the left ear is facing the opposite way, so of course you cant see the hole
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Noburo Commander Joined: 10 June 2014 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 279	Posted: 14 November 2007 at 9:31am
	Green raven is right, at the way you have him standing you would be able to see part of it. Also, keep to one light source. I made a quick edit to show you what I mean. [Light source is coming from upper left] Edit - Forgot to mention this, but the dither pattern only appearing in the hair doesn't really fit. Edited by Noburo - 14 November 2007 at 9:31am
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D-Puff Seaman Joined: 06 December 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 16 November 2007 at 4:20am
	all right, back to the forum. this is the one i posted in the gallery- i'll work on another ASAP, but i'm on my way to school, and i'll work on it get back
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