| WIP (Work In Progress) | |
| |
|
| Author | Message |
|
Skull Master
Commander
Joined: 29 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200 |
![]() Topic: SoulPosted: 19 November 2007 at 5:56am |
![]() |
|
leel: "At least I'm not claiming to a master in anything." lol, oops. Xp |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Metaru
Commander
Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2007 at 10:38am |
|
sorry, is this Non Pixel Art?
|
|
|
I ate leel's babies
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Squirrelsquid
Commander
Joined: 18 July 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 259 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2007 at 11:51am |
|
I believe this is pixel art... but...
DUDE! get rid of that "Glow of Banding Madness" !! seriously, mate, get rid of the glow, or start over in that department, as it doesn't add anything atm. the wing thing itself is ok, I guess. |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Platnium
Commander
Joined: 27 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 319 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2007 at 12:19pm |
|
The glowing needs to go!
|
|
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Tarenken
Commander
Joined: 19 September 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 251 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2007 at 12:25pm |
|
Personally you could pull off a one-pixel glow in any color but white... but it's your choice.
Anyways, the rest looks good, but it might look better transparent. |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Hatch
Admiral
Joined: 05 August 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1387 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2007 at 12:33pm |
|
This piece suffers from banding.
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Platnium
Commander
Joined: 27 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 319 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2007 at 12:42pm |
|
Heres a quick edit, i took away the glow:
|
|
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Tarenken
Commander
Joined: 19 September 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 251 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2007 at 12:44pm |
|
Now that Platnium took away the glow, I can see you need to anti-alias around the lines, or at least make them smoother, because they're quite rough without the glow.
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Skull Master
Commander
Joined: 29 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2007 at 3:47pm |
|
Okay, and yeah, it does look better, I don't know what I was thinking... ^^;
Edit: Any better? :3 Edited by Skull Master - 19 November 2007 at 3:58pm |
|
leel: "At least I'm not claiming to a master in anything." lol, oops. Xp |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
herbert_west
Seaman
Joined: 11 November 2007 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2007 at 4:04pm |
|
Have you played that game "The Dig" from LucasArts? This reminds me of the alien spirits in that game. Neat concept. Looking forward to seeing some updated glow.
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Skull Master
Commander
Joined: 29 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2007 at 4:13pm |
|
I haven't, but thanks, I am to! ^^
|
|
leel: "At least I'm not claiming to a master in anything." lol, oops. Xp |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Skull Master
Commander
Joined: 29 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2007 at 4:36pm |
|
Does this work? :/
|
|
leel: "At least I'm not claiming to a master in anything." lol, oops. Xp |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Hatch
Admiral
Joined: 05 August 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1387 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2007 at 7:35pm |
|
I believe what you're attempting to do there is antialiasing, also known as AA. Unfortunately you've executed it poorly. Nothing to be ashamed of, as AA is tricky. It may be helpful to check out some tutorials.
The first step is cleaning up your lines: they've got jaggies all over the place. Once you've cleaned them up the best you can, then you can antialias. I've done a bit to give you an idea of how it might look:
It's not great AA as I'm just learning to do it properly myself, but hopefully it helps a little. Good luck! Let me know if any of this is unclear. |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Skull Master
Commander
Joined: 29 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200 |
![]() Posted: 21 November 2007 at 5:02am |
|
It this a lill better? :/
![]() |
|
leel: "At least I'm not claiming to a master in anything." lol, oops. Xp |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Skull Master
Commander
Joined: 29 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200 |
![]() Posted: 21 November 2007 at 5:56am |
|
Done? :/
|
|
leel: "At least I'm not claiming to a master in anything." lol, oops. Xp |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
surt
Commander
Joined: 30 December 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 413 |
![]() Posted: 21 November 2007 at 6:00am |
|
Looking better. No turn your newfound AA skills to the internal features (feathers?).
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
FrostPumpkin
Commander
Joined: 18 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 188 |
![]() Posted: 21 November 2007 at 6:58am |
|
i'm not sure about it :
![]() but maybe it can help you (and there is less colors) |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Skull Master
Commander
Joined: 29 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200 |
![]() Posted: 21 November 2007 at 6:37pm |
|
Surt: Ok. ^^
FrostPumpkin: I think of souls as being bright blueish white, also, my lightsource is coming from inside the soul, like so: ![]() But thanks for trying to help! ^^ Edited by Skull Master - 21 November 2007 at 6:37pm |
|
leel: "At least I'm not claiming to a master in anything." lol, oops. Xp |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Skull Master
Commander
Joined: 29 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200 |
![]() Posted: 21 November 2007 at 6:46pm |
|
I couldn't do much, but, I did do this:
![]() (Please say I'm done know. ^^;; ) |
|
leel: "At least I'm not claiming to a master in anything." lol, oops. Xp |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Monkey 'o Doom
Commander
Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994 |
![]() Posted: 21 November 2007 at 8:07pm |
|
Your AA still leaves a considerable bit to be desired. Maybe you should try antialiasing a black ball onto a white BG as a quick practice, and once (you perfect that/we help you perfect that) you can move back onto this piece?
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
||
Forum Jump |
You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot create polls in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum |
|