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Feron
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Topic: small character
Posted: 01 January 2008 at 4:35am

c&c?

hmmmm.

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Metaru
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Posted: 01 January 2008 at 9:22am

leg's length appears to be unproportional to the torso's length. strange, considering the well achieved anatomy you got in the upper part of the body.

if references were used, would be a good idea to post them, in order to make comparisions easier.

I ate leel's babies

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Feron
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Posted: 01 January 2008 at 9:45am

im not using a reference... is this any better?

Edited by Feron - 01 January 2008 at 9:57am

hmmmm.

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Feron
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Posted: 01 January 2008 at 10:50am

hmmmm.

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leel
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Posted: 01 January 2008 at 11:25am

Wow the upper body looks great (welcome back btw) but the legs update is sort of a letdown tbh. The legs just seem.. what's the word.. sorta gummy?
Looking up references doesn't mean you have to pick one and copy it exactly, just look at the position so you can better understand the shapes I guess.

Also I think you should go back to the boxers/shorts sketch - cause the spandex looking pant adds to the gummy bubbly look I think. And with the wide shorts you could have some awesome folds (like the diagonals on the crotch) and add a lot of interest to the piece.

But yes, hope to see more from you again ;)

Edit: p.s. he needs more of a butt

Edited by leel - 01 January 2008 at 11:25am

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Hapiel
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Posted: 01 January 2008 at 1:25pm

I still feel like I am not in the position to edit something like this, but I tought by my self: It can never really be wrong to post something, even if its bad..

I changed alot of things wrong, but maybe there is something thats right, and inspires you to do this yourself as well :)

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Feron
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Posted: 03 January 2008 at 4:55pm

lollige: wat a brilliant attitude.

http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/28287.htm

calling it done now!

Edited by Feron - 03 January 2008 at 4:56pm

hmmmm.

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Feron Midshipman Joined: 17 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 99	Topic: small character Posted: 01 January 2008 at 4:35am
	c&c?
	hmmmm.
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Metaru Commander Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 01 January 2008 at 9:22am
	leg's length appears to be unproportional to the torso's length. strange, considering the well achieved anatomy you got in the upper part of the body. if references were used, would be a good idea to post them, in order to make comparisions easier.
	I ate leel's babies
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Feron Midshipman Joined: 17 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 99	Posted: 01 January 2008 at 9:45am
	im not using a reference... is this any better? Edited by Feron - 01 January 2008 at 9:57am
	hmmmm.
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Feron Midshipman Joined: 17 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 99	Posted: 01 January 2008 at 10:50am

	hmmmm.
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 01 January 2008 at 11:25am
	Wow the upper body looks great (welcome back btw) but the legs update is sort of a letdown tbh. The legs just seem.. what's the word.. sorta gummy? Looking up references doesn't mean you have to pick one and copy it exactly, just look at the position so you can better understand the shapes I guess. Also I think you should go back to the boxers/shorts sketch - cause the spandex looking pant adds to the gummy bubbly look I think. And with the wide shorts you could have some awesome folds (like the diagonals on the crotch) and add a lot of interest to the piece. But yes, hope to see more from you again ;) Edit: p.s. he needs more of a butt Edited by leel - 01 January 2008 at 11:25am
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 01 January 2008 at 1:25pm
	I still feel like I am not in the position to edit something like this, but I tought by my self: It can never really be wrong to post something, even if its bad.. I changed alot of things wrong, but maybe there is something thats right, and inspires you to do this yourself as well :)
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Feron Midshipman Joined: 17 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 99	Posted: 03 January 2008 at 4:55pm
	lollige: wat a brilliant attitude. http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/28287.htm calling it done now! Edited by Feron - 03 January 2008 at 4:56pm
	hmmmm.
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